This concept is really cool. Tbh, I usually dislike poems with lots of formatting changes, but your formatting is actually super effective. Good job!
Wow, I love this piece so much! The second person POV was definitely a good choice and I felt so refreshed after I finished reading it. Someday, I hope to write something as impactful as you wrote, something that made me feel the way I felt after reading this.
Sorry this is so late after February. I finished the review but completely forgot to submit it. Oops! Anyways, I think it is a great idea to do a poem per month.
about 2 years
PROMPT: In Motion
Wow, the imagery in this is amazing. Reading it makes me feel like I am with Haley in the forest.
over 2 years