Mr. Colin E.

United States of America

Hey everybody, I'm now a Senior Peer Reviewer for Write The World.com. Former Write The World young writer, now mentoring other WTW young writers through peer reviewers! Wish me luck and hoping you make wonderful pieces!

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Do not hesitate to express your thoughts and stories. Everyone's story matters here. You matter. Tell your story to the world.

Mr. Colin E. (United States of America)() reviewed:

Future

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Hello CALIEAN STUART, it's your friendly neighborhood Senior Peer Reviewer, and I'm here to say that you've done well for a first draft. While there are some things in this piece that need to be improved upon, it's still very...

4 days ago

Mr. Colin E. (United States of America)() reviewed:

When the Sun Exploded

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Hello Raquel, it's your friendly neighborhood Senior Peer Reviewer, Mr. Colin E. I very much enjoyed Senior Peer Reviewing your piece, When The Sun Exploded, and even though the title seemed a little weird, I ended up finding it to...

4 days ago

Mr. Colin E. (United States of America)() reviewed:

No Planet Like Earth

PROMPT: Environmental Journalism Competition 2020

Hello LynnAnna, splendid work you've done here. I don't usually do academic stuff on Write The World.com, but I found your piece on climate change to be excellent. You really did well in statistically and persuasively showing the reader how...

7 days ago

Mr. Colin E. (United States of America)() reviewed:

This Kid

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Hello Marshmallow_Fruit_Loops, I very much enjoyed Senior Peer Reviewing your poem and despite it being short, I found it incredibly moving. This is one of those rare pieces that displays a common truth; no matter who someone is or their...

12 days ago

Mr. Colin E. (United States of America)() reviewed:

The Willow Tree

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Hello, Princess Maria, it's your friendly neighborhood Senior Peer Reviewer, and once more, you've done an excellent job. I found this piece to be emotionally moving, well written, and extremely witty in terms of having the story be told from...

12 days ago

Mr. Colin E. (United States of America)() reviewed:

Kitsune | #febvalentine

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Hello .amelia, this was a most wonderful piece to read and review. I loved the overall cuteness and fantastical storyline, the use of description, and your take on a Japanese Kitsune (Madeline was so precious)! While there are some things...

18 days ago

Mr. Colin E. (United States of America)() reviewed:

Walter and the Monster

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition 2019

Cololo231, this was a very nice piece you wrote! I loved the idea of a frightening, yet friendly and magical monster showing a pampered, ignorant dog all the kinds of suffering people and animals go through in the world to...

22 days ago

Mr. Colin E. (United States of America)() reviewed:

Motorway

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Lottifus, you have done a spectacular job with this piece. It was very realistic and imaginative in terms of description, repetition, and word choice, "scrubby leaves" is excellent. While there are a few things that need a smidgen of improvement,...

23 days ago

Mr. Colin E. (United States of America)() reviewed:

Slytherins

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Hi Kaitlyn, so wonderful to have you back and I very much enjoyed reviewing this old piece of yours on Write The World.com. You did a very excellent job in capturing the true essence of Slytherin and breaking the common...

23 days ago

Mr. Colin E. (United States of America)() reviewed:

ColorBlind

PROMPT: Open Prompt

monochromatic_rainbow, this is a very interesting piece and please excuse me saying so, very ironic considering your username. I've never really seen any pieces where the story is told from the point of view from someone who's color blind, but...

27 days ago