JediKnightGirl

United States

15 y/o
Bi, she/her
Hopeless romantic, fangirl, feminist, anxiety
Hufflepuff, Hamiltrash, & more
Obsessed with Thomas Jefferson
Artist, Writer, Musician, Singer
Love, music, & friendship are everything
<3

Message from Writer

Books ya'll need to read:
Simon vs. the Homo Sapiens Agenda / Leah on the Offbeat - Becky Albertalli
Scythe / Thunderhead - Neal Shusterman (thank me later)
Second Chance Summer - Morgan Matson
The Sun is Also a Star - Nicola Yoon
I Am Princess X - Cherie Priest
Ship It - Britta Lundin

Favorite singers/bands:
P!ATD
Hayley Kiyoko
Charlie Puth
Old Dominion
Theory of a Deadman

All my fandoms:
Hamilton
Star Wars
Harry Potter (Hufflepuff)
The Greatest Showman
Dear Evan Hansen
Newsies

Favorite YouTubers:
Moriah Elizabeth
NerdECrafter
James Charles
SuperCarlinBrothers

Peer Reviews

The Choice Part 1

FREE WRITING

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How I Singlehandedly Murdered the Stars

PROMPT: Enlightenment

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Untitled

FREE WRITING

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Ophelia

FREE WRITING

I really enjoyed this poem and it made me feel so many different emotions, and had really good closure at the end. I honestly don't think I have anything negative to say. You did an amazing job, keep writing!

over 2 years

He Was My World

FREE WRITING

You did an amazing job on this piece and it was clearly well thought out. The only suggestion I might have would be to separate this poem into stanzas, so the poem still feels repetitive, but adds a little more weight to each statement about how "he was your world." Overall I'm so glad I found this piece and it was very well-written. Incredible job :)

almost 3 years

The Government of a Friend Group

PROMPT: Friendship Tweet

I love this because to the rest of the world it's a metaphor but to us it's just life. Literally every day. Also sorry it took me so long to submit this, I started it and then forgot about it, but anyways great job!

about 3 years

The Phoenix and The Red Sun

FREE WRITING

The only advice I have would be that you use the words "future" and "ashes" a lot in the same area. Like they're clumped together. I think it mostly works with "ashes", but with "future" it seemed a little repetitive. I also might change the title to just "The Red Sun", but it still works great as it is. This is honestly a great poem, and I think you could definitely enter it in a contest, on Write the World or anywhere else. Awesome job with this one! :)

over 3 years

A Shadowy Echo

FREE WRITING

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Cannot Go Ignored: Chapter 1

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Michelle that was WONDERFUL oh my god.

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