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Anna Krekelberg

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Anna Krekelberg (United States) published:

Christmas in the Midwest

PROMPT: My December Writing Competition 2018

     Winter is not winter without snow.  I have always felt that way from the first.  My Dad was born in Minnesota, and lived there for most of his life, so he was used to the long winters, the bone-chilling temperatures, and the huge drifts of snow.  I was born in Minnesota as well, but we moved before I could take away any memories of the winters there.  My Dad has thick blood, and all through the winter he...

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2 months ago

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Anna Krekelberg (United States) reviewed:

Confession

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2018

What do you mean, the "amalgamation of the following families could cause the intended outcome?" Which families are you talking about? What intended outcome? Are you blending the state of the world and politics with hunting and your feelings about...

3 months ago

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Anna Krekelberg (United States) published:

A Tale of Two Kings - a story of friendship and sharing

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2018

     One thing that is worse than two friends who cannot get along is two rulers who cannot get along.  This is what one country faced when their beloved king died and, having no heir, his two favorite generals ascended the throne.  They co-ruled in anything but peace, and the nation became infected with the same contentious spirit.
     King Philip wished that the country could be united and that peace could once again be restored.  Finally he got...

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3 months ago

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Anna Krekelberg (United States) published:

If the Army Were Made of Boys...

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Boys to the left, boys to the right
Marching, prancing, ready to fight!
Boys with helmets made from tubs
Boys with armguards that itch and rub.
Boys with breastplates made from tin
Shields that fasten with a pin.
Boys with holster belts too tight
Boys with swords very light.
Boys with faces fierce and foul
Boys that tried to make a scowl.
Boys that only laughed and could not frown,
Looking at a pal’s funny fighting gown.
The leader, dressed...

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4 months ago

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Anna Krekelberg (United States) published:

The Adventures of Dennis Hutchins

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Chapter 1 - Meet Dennis
     “Dennis?”
     The front door creaked.  “Yes, Auntie?”
     “Where ya goin’?”
     “Jest takin’ Jack to the apple tree, Auntie.” answered a small boy.
     “Auntie” looked at the boy.  “What do you do up at that old apple tree all the time?” the lady shook her head.
     “I eat the apples.”
     “You must eat a whole lot of apples.”
     Dennis paused in...

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6 months ago

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Anna Krekelberg (United States) reviewed:

The difference between beating and disciplining your children

PROMPT: Op-Ed Competition 2018

Be careful of misspelling, punctuation, and capitalization.

10 months ago

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10 months ago

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Anna Krekelberg (United States) reviewed:

Petoskey, MI

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I would change the words "truest breathtaking" to "truely breathtaking" or "amazingly/wonderfully breathtaking." But other than that, great job!

10 months ago