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whenvesselruled

United States

grace // 17 // local dreamer

Message from Writer

I want to write forever and ever and ever, never ceasing, never once letting my mind stand still.

"Courage, dear heart." -C.S Lewis

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whenvesselruled (United States) published:

Where I Am From

PROMPT: Where I'm From

I am from:
Bubbling music, rising higher,
5-and-a-half years before Nico And The Niners.
I am from piano notes:
Truce behind a curtain,
Holding Onto You is certain.
This is different, this is new,
I'm not used to this new sound,
But I listen it all the way into the ground.
Vessel is my home,
And I'm not used to this new terrain,
But my path has becoming straight and plain.
I'm following Clancy, 
Through uncertain beats and lyrics,
This...

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about 1 month ago

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whenvesselruled (United States) published:

counting on.

PROMPT: Subtotals

Number of horses tamed: 2. Number of thoughts tamed: 16,097. 
Number of people I am friends with: 47. Number of people that are friends with me: 12.
Number of times I've been okay: 10,001. Number of times I haven't been okay: 0.
Number of poems I've written: 987. Number of poems I haven't written: 2,098,290.
Number of times I thought I would die: 1,300. Number of times I wanted to die: 13.
Number of schools I've left: 8. Number of...

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about 2 months ago

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whenvesselruled (United States) published:

dunsky

PROMPT: Paint Swatch

Dunsky was a color made of sad country music and dirt road sunsets. It was painted by a brush of memory, tinted with green pastures, watered down with tears. It was a crackling fireplace, and the shadows that flit across a sun strewn path. It was the light brown of a day coming to a close, covered with the floating dapples of a stream beneath a low tree. Dunsky made me stop and feel alive when I looked at it....

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whenvesselruled (United States) reviewed:

Anxiety

FREE WRITING

Perhaps take out the curse word. The piece would be just as powerful without it :)

2 months ago

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3 months ago

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whenvesselruled (United States) reviewed:

Shape shifting Poem

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This is a very sad piece, and the weight of the words conveys this perfectly. It's beautifully written too, and is surprisingly relatable. I love the idea of it, and the way you executed it.

3 months ago

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whenvesselruled (United States) reviewed:

Grandma's Cookies.

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2018

Your Grandma sounds like a wonderful woman, and your siblings and cousins are lucky to have someone like you to teach them how to bake! Keep writing, and you'll go far!

3 months ago

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