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Ella roch

United States

hi,
I am Ella. I am a young writer and want a lot of feedback to make me better. I have always loved to write but haven't really got much feedback. so it would be really helpful if you give me some feedback. I am really excited to share my writing.

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Ella roch (United States) published:

Earth

PROMPT: Environmental Writing Competition 2018

    why are we on earth? do we deserve its wonders? Do we truly own it? Is it really just the place we live on or is it more. 
We have built large cities on its fertile soil. We have built homes were someone already lived. we took mountains and charged people thousands just to see them. We saw animals and put them in cages. We saw open planes put landfills Through none of this not enough people saw it and said wow. Not...

over 1 year ago

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Ella roch (United States) published:

Dear,2017

PROMPT: Signing Off

Dear,
2017

    You came and went so quickly. Why is it because the world is spinning to fast ?. Is it because the world is growing forgetful and bad? Is it because of the hurricanes that left people without homes? Or is it because of the new technology that made people drones? Or the forest fires in California? Were people had to flee? Or is it because we all care so much what others think. Were we not kind? Were we not good? Did we not treat...

over 1 year ago

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Ella roch (United States) published:

Smart Town

FREE WRITING

     Smart Town has been the same for as long as anyone can remember. I have been 13 for as long as I or anyone can remember too.  Since no one ever gets older everyone has stayed the same age as they were when the world kind of ended. I don't just mean look the same I mean they act the same too. So people who had little kids when it happened they still have little kids now and forever. No one...

over 1 year ago

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Ella roch (United States) published:

note to self

FREE WRITING

Dear,
self

why do they compare you to others? 
why do you listen to there criticism?
Why do you care?
Why do you listen to others that try to break you down?
Yet through all of this, you don't fall down
You stay strong like your bolted to the ground
for one simple reason and that reason is
You keep spirited and happy so you can last and last and last
I know as long as I love my self the words will...

over 1 year ago

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Ella roch (United States) published:

the intersection

PROMPT: Intersection

The noisy sounds of the city carry far and wide. The honking horns, Hurried footsteps, and everyday chatter that follows. Yet just outside of the city a small doe takes a small drink of water as a wolf does the same on the other side. When the deer sees the wolf she will surely run away. The wind carries a small bird above them the birds singing as it starts to soar higher. The bird changes direction to its home. The wind now carries...

almost 2 years ago

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Ella roch (United States) published:

Infected

FREE WRITING

    I slipped out of bed. My long red hair sticking straight up. I had to brush and brush and brush it until it finally was straight then I tied it into a ponytail. My hair was still sticking up I'm was going to be late. I put on a baseball cap and ran out the door grabbing my backpack as my older brother started the car. As my school came into view I sank slowly into the seat not wanting to get out...

almost 2 years ago

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Giphy

Ella roch (United States) started following Camille Czech (United States)

almost 2 years ago

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almost 2 years ago

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Ella roch (United States) reviewed:

Little Bird

PROMPT: Birdsong

great poem!

almost 2 years ago

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almost 2 years ago