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Hallie

United States

Hallie loves writing, making art, acting, singing, and telling jokes. She is accepting of everyone no matter their ethnicity, gender, sexuality, or anything else. She always wants to help and always tries to do whats right.

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Hallie (United States) published:

Goodbye, Grandma.

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    I don't understand. This doesn't feel real. Just last month you and I, we were speaking of school. I drew you a picture, which now hangs in my room. But then they told me you stopped talking, and then after a week, your heart also stopped beating. My mother sat at your bedside that whole week, six hours away, too afraid to leave for only a second. She was there when you left, and I wonder if you even knew...

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Hallie (United States) published:

I Know, but I do Not

PROMPT: The Unknown

I know my name,
but not my fate,
or if a higher power, me, did he create?

I know I'm loved,
but I don't know why,
because this self-hate burns my skin rye.

I know what I want to be,
but not what I will become.
These obstacles before me I'll never overcome.

I know I don't like to be alone,
but not if I'll find another.
Isn't there more to life than just a lover?

I know I'll die,
but...

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Hallie (United States) published:

The Untold Tale

PROMPT: Monster Flash Fiction Competition 2018

   
    We have all been told the disconcerting tales of the monsters that loom among us by a storyteller who holds a flashlight beneath their chin. Fictional characters dreamt up by creative minds seeking to elicit fear from anyone who will listen. But even the bravest of them cannot bring themselves to tell this story, for this is no mere fairy tale. These creatures are real.
    It has been argued how long these creatures have been among us....

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Hallie (United States) reviewed:

The Oracle

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It makes me sad to see that you only have one post, I would love to read more of your work! The only thing I can think of is maybe some different types of sentence variation, and maybe try to...

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Hallie (United States) published:

The Embers of my Heart

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The dancing embers around my heart shall never be contained
Those who try prepare to die and burn upon the flames
Your skin will become leather from my fire set ablaze
And I can bet you all I have you’ll wish you had refrained

To your ludicrous rules, forever shall I disobey
Time and time again, me you will always fail to confine
with love there always is a way; I’m sick of you calling mine pure fiction
And for...

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