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Rachel22

United States

I love dogs, Disney movies (particularly Mulan), reading, volunteering, and writing obviously. I am vice president in my school's National Junior's Honor Society, and I love that. I hope to become an RN someday.

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Some of my topics for writing come to me soon after reading a prompt or most of the time it is a random topic that hits me in the middle of the night. I hope you enjoy my writing, but please give me help if you thing that I need it.

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Ideas

FREE WRITING

Here are a few idea's from online: -A murder mystery where everybody thinks they are responsible and try and cover it up. -A story of 4 best friends where each of them represents a season. -A depressed guy moves into...

3 months ago

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Rachel22 (United States) published:

As Well as a Man

PROMPT: Open Prompt

5 words.
The base of the entire feminist movement.

As well as a man...
Add it to any statement and it becomes demeaning.

"Wow, she shoots as well as a man."

"Please, you can never run as well as a man"

"Can you lead this group as well as a man could?"

As well as a man
As well as a man
As well as a man

When this is said 
you are saying that
the level a woman
can...

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3 months ago

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Rachel22 (United States) reviewed:

Well

FREE WRITING

You could write a song about... -What it would be like talking to a past abuser (Parent, S.O., friend, etc.) -Explaining what it is like talking to a crush -What it is like talking to someone who is hurting (physically,...

3 months ago

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Rachel22 (United States) published:

Friendship

PROMPT: Friendship Tweet

    Willing to laugh your true laugh in front of them,
    We all know we have a fake one.
    Willing to tell them everything,
    Even if they don't want to hear it.
    Willing to have differing opinions,
    Nothing is more boring than 2 of the same.
    

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Rachel22 (United States) published:

One of Their Kind

PROMPT: Monster Flash Fiction Competition 2018

    "The world didn't end in a bang or a whisper, but one scream at a time, and it's all because of me. I wasn't easily scared. That's what we bonded over. I knew from a young age that I had to kill him to truly be a man, but I couldn't. We were like brothers by that point." Elliott looked up at his angel to see if she was still listening. He was scared now. She would...

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4 months ago

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Rachel22 (United States) reviewed:

A Guide to Love

PROMPT: Monster Flash Fiction Competition 2018

The part where it says, "The day is a day- you know how it goes." is a little strange. Maybe reword it or add the word 'normal' to it between the words 'a' and 'day'. that will make it sound...

4 months ago

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Rachel22 (United States) reviewed:

Thanatos

PROMPT: Monster Flash Fiction Competition 2018

When you are saying something, even if it is in sign language, you have to put quotation marks like in the 2nd paragraph when he signs 'Don't worry, Bella'

4 months ago

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Rachel22 (United States) published:

One of Their Kind

PROMPT: Monster Flash Fiction Competition 2018

    "The world did not end in a bang or a whisper, but one scream at a time, and it's all because of me. I wasn't easily scared. That's what we bonded over. I knew from a young age that I had to kill him to truly be a man, but I couldn't. We were like brothers by that point." Elliott looked up at his angel to see if she was still listening. His was scared now. This angel...

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