jewel

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if he comes back

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there’s a boy sitting next to you and you think he might’ve loved you once.
he’s sitting next to you and you’re in his car instead of your chair at school and he's humming old songs while the radio blares and you drum your fingers anxiously on the dashboard. now your hand is resting on his thigh and fire licks up from your fingertips to your arm to your chest and settles deep in your stomach but he doesn't look...

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    Before I know it, the tiny white digits on my computer screen glare “1:30 AM” at me. I try to drag myself away from my seat but something chains me down, no matter how hard I struggle. 
    It must be something about the narrator that keeps me so spellbound. The narrator's words, simple lines in a sans-serif font, command me as I direct my tiny character across the screen. The nameless, bodiless narrator seems to encompass something or even someone...

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tidal cycle

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We were bathing in the afterglow of the sharp mid-afternoon sun and melted Wendy's ice cream when I noticed he was starting to look like my father: the keenness in his gaze, warm hands always clasped to himself, the stubble of a lost man.
"When am I going to meet your mom?" I asked, knowing his answer. He only sighed, pulled me closer, stared somewhere far away. I laid my head on his chest and marveled at the constancy of...

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Great job on this! I loved your control of language in this. Keep writing!!

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