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richardmontanez

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richardmontanez (United States) published:

My Sister is Dead

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I walked through the door and I could feel a coldness in the atmosphere. I just got back from Sarah's party. I had a few drinks, but I felt fine. In the room were two policemen sitting with my mom and dad. They were both sobbing. I took another step forward and they made eye contact with me. I was too scared to ask what was going on. I noticed, Rachel, my sister wasn't in the room. Where was she? She...

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richardmontanez (United States) published:

Our Generation

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Technology
increasing every day by the minute,
making life easier with fewer steps
for our generation and the generation to come
Let’s not all get together, let’s just group chat
Why come over when we can just facetime?
What happened to having intimate conversations with someone,
now we what? Talk through a small screen
and show emotion through cartoon faces called emoji’s?
What happened to walking up to a pretty girl and ask her out in person,
Now we choose...

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