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Almagation15

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Almagation15 (United States) reviewed:

THE GREAT SAVE

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I think this moment has some great narrative potential. As stated, I think the piece would benefit greatly if it was slowed down a bit more. Maybe describe how it felt when you were uncertain whether you would win or...

over 1 year ago

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Almagation15 (United States) reviewed:

Why do I write?

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I love your writing. Keep writing about your childhood and your pain, but don't forget to take time to write about the things that center you! Balance is critical to move on from any past negativities! Thanks for sharing your...

almost 2 years ago

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Almagation15 (United States) reviewed:

Why I Write

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Overall, a very emotionally stolid piece. I can tell that writing holds great meaning to you through your words and your meaning is very clear to me. There are just a few typos, but very minor. Thanks for sharing your...

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Almagation15 (United States) published:

For a Poet

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quiet now on the sinful lands
all dim
the sharp moon
splinters against the waters

old man walking alone 
across the stretch of sand
for the sake of it - dark, peppered beard
full of academic wisdom: 
he has a thousand books in his head
and a perfumed letter in his pocket
he's kissed a million times 
it still smells like Lancôme

and the postcard traveling now from miles away
folded letter sleeping inside
like a baby, hush, Papa's coming...

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Almagation15 (United States) published:

Why I Write

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I write for the things I no longer have. I write for the San Diego sunsets of my birth city, the neighborhoods crouched there in the rolling body of the California soil. I write for my birth mother, just a name and a character floating in a world I don't belong to. I write for the things that could be, for the alternative worlds I ponder when it's just me, the night, and the bed in connective silence. I write...

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Almagation15 (United States) reviewed:

Faded Yellow Desk

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I like the descriptive language that you use throughout the piece! Some of my comments are just questions I have for myself for the piece so I really don't have too many critiques. Good work!

almost 2 years ago