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instanceofregret (United States) reviewed:

Faded Yellow Desk

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I like the descriptive language that you use throughout the piece! Some of my comments are just questions I have for myself for the piece so I really don't have too many critiques. Good work!

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A look at a 45-year-olds thoughts

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Just watch a few typos and organization. Otherwise, aside from some comments, I loved reading what you were able to find in your interview! Great work!

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instanceofregret (United States) reviewed:

Pieces Everywhere

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Thanks for sharing! Good work.

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Wish List

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Hope you get to complete some of these things on your list before or after you turn 18! I love your list. You seem to enthusiastic and full of life. Don't wait to start getting some of those goals crossed...

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instanceofregret (United States) reviewed:

sad eyes

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Thanks for writing! Good work!

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instanceofregret (United States) reviewed:

The End

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I like the premise. Just a few punctuation errors. Thanks for sharing!

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instanceofregret (United States) published:

For a Poet

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quiet now on the sinful lands
all dim and the sharp moon
splinters against the waters

old man walking alone 
across the stretch of sand
for the sake of it - dark, peppered beard
full of academic wisdom: 
he has a thousand books in his head
and a perfumed letter in his pocket
he's kissed a million times 
it still smells like Lancôme

and the postcard being sent from miles away
with the folded letter, sleeping inside
like a baby,...

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instanceofregret (United States) reviewed:

Like I'm Special to You

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Between the Silence and Sound

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Great idea to utilize music into a piece about liberation. Thanks for writing!

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For a Poet

quiet now on the sinful lands
all dim and the sharp moon
splinters against the waters

old man walking alone 
across the stretch of sand
for the sake of it - dark, peppered beard
full of academic wisdom: 
he has a thousand books in his head
and a perfumed letter in his pocket
he's kissed a million times 
it still smells like Lancôme

and the postcard being sent from miles away
with the folded letter, sleeping inside
like a baby, hush, Papa's coming home now
from the lost years
the accumulation of all that's lost
all that will never be seen and is
forgotten





 

Madness

sometimes
when the moon is high
and the lights are dim
I learn to live
and learn again


 

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