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neo7v

United States

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Even when you don't like your work, someone out there will. Write forward, don't read back on what you've done.

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neo7v (United States) published:

An Ambiguous Wish

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition

The oncoming night fell like a curtain on the small coastal town. The breeze sang softly with the telltale voice of a young girl. The waves lapped against her feet and washed away any signs she was there as she walked down the shoreline, her voice crescendoing then softening with the tides.
    “As the ocean pulls on through the tides and mother calls me home, I wish to thee a big goodbye and hope you’re not alone…” The little...

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neo7v (United States) reviewed:

Digital

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I really enjoyed this piece! You know it's good when your mind gets blown by the end of it. Keep up the amazing work!

15 days ago

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neo7v (United States) reviewed:

The Keys Click.

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Poetry is a very sensory detail oriented writing. I truly love this poem as it brings a simplistic yet pleasing approach to this. If you wanted to continue writing poetry and expanding on that, I would recommend continuing to focus...

15 days ago

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neo7v (United States) reviewed:

just another astrophile

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This is such a good vibes poem, and I'm really happy that I read it. Sometimes you just need a poem that means exactly what it says, and this right here is that poem :)

15 days ago

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neo7v (United States) reviewed:

Sacrifice

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Great poem! The opening and ending lines were perfect for drawing a reader in and leaving them wanting more.

15 days ago

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neo7v (United States) reviewed:

STOLEN

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Overall, I really like this poem! The formatting worked well to bring an impact to the poem. I believe you just need to add a bit more to the poem to bring the reader in. Thanks for writing this!

15 days ago

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neo7v (United States) reviewed:

"It's The End Of The World As We Know It"

PROMPT: Open Prompt

I don't think I can sing my praises of this piece enough to anyone! I was kept on the edge of my seat throughout this entire piece, fingers crossed in hoping the narrator would be alright in the end. And...

17 days ago

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neo7v (United States) reviewed:

Words

PROMPT: Open Prompt

I truly loved this piece and am happy that I get to read the first piece of someone's! You have done a great job in getting your passion about words through in this piece! If any comment I made is...

17 days ago