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ionaaa100

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A Chocolate Woman

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Can you see her?
​Gently melting over herself, in the rich, dark waters of the night, silkily wrapping over her wet silhouette.
Can you feel her?
The thrumming over her heartbeat bouncing along the floorboards, dancing around to your shaking feet.  
​Perhaps it is in her glistening diamond eyes, eating up your attention, drinking in your body, as she writhes in the stitches of her dripping vessel, that makes your ears and your eyes and your skin prick and...

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ionaaa100 (United Kingdom) reviewed:

Oh Jake....

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Have you thought about adding a motif throughout your piece? For example, you refer to 'turning to ice,' in the last line, and I think it would be interesting if you intertwined the ideas of ice or water throughout in...

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ionaaa100 (United Kingdom) published:

A Chocolate Woman

FREE WRITING

Can you see her?
​Gently melting over herself, in the rich, dark waters of the night, silkily wrapping over her wet silhouette.
Can you feel her?
The thrumming over her heartbeat bouncing along the floorboards, dancing around to your shaking feet.  
​Perhaps it is in her glistening diamond eyes, eating up your attention, drinking in your body, as she writhes in the stitches of her dripping vessel, that makes your ears and your eyes and your skin prick and...

Seeking Peer Reviews

10 months ago