finleigh

United States of America

Hey, I'm Finleigh, and I don't know what to put in my bio! Well, except that I'm working on a novel (none of you are allowed to read it until it's done), and I do not like writing non-fiction.

Peer Reviews

Katie Ledecky for the Win

PROMPT: Sports Journalism Competition 2017

I know from reading past sports articles that they're not usually in the first person. I think you did a good job with it, however. And since you were writing about Katie's Rio 800 final, maybe say how she was the favorite and how she was undefeated in individual swims at that time.

about 2 years

What Sports Should Be

PROMPT: Sports Journalism Competition 2017

Overall this piece was very good, you just need to tie in the quote a little better.

about 2 years

Dear Future

FREE WRITING

I really think you could take this piece to a whole new level of you expanded it, elaborated, and maybe even wrote a response. But hey, this is your story, do whatever you want with it!

about 2 years

Prologue to a novel I am writing

FREE WRITING

Stay with this story, it's already really good and I want to continue.

about 2 years

Glytch's Log

FREE WRITING

Maybe just add like a prologue about Project Argo but other wise this story is awesome!

about 2 years