finleigh

United States of America

Hey, I'm Finleigh, and I don't know what to put in my bio! Well, except that I'm working on a novel (none of you are allowed to read it until it's done), and I do not like writing non-fiction.

finleigh (United States of America) published:

The Hostage Game - Chapter One

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Max slowed his pace to a walk as he rounded the corner, turning into his driveway. He stopped his watch and put his hands on his head to catch his breath. He watched it puff out in front of him, matching the snow on the ground. For some reason, he always liked running in the winter better than running in the summer. There was something about breathing in the frigid air that just calmed him down, like an odd sort...
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finleigh (United States of America) published:

The Hostage Game

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2017

    Jasper woke to the gentle moving of what he thought was the boat, but then he opened his eyes and realized he was upside down. He tried to sit up, but he was slung potato-sack style over someone’s shoulder. He tried to wriggle out of their grasp, but they only hung on tighter. He knew it was futile to try and resist, so even though it infuriated him, even though it scared him that he was being taken somewhere unknown,...

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finleigh (United States of America) reviewed:

What Sports Should Be

PROMPT: Sports Journalism Competition 2017

Overall this piece was very good, you just need to tie in the quote a little better.

about 2 years ago

finleigh (United States of America) reviewed:

Katie Ledecky for the Win

PROMPT: Sports Journalism Competition 2017

I know from reading past sports articles that they're not usually in the first person. I think you did a good job with it, however. And since you were writing about Katie's Rio 800 final, maybe say how she was...

about 2 years ago

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finleigh (United States of America) published:

First Day

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I sat down in my first class, Chemistry. That's probably why I didn't remember much - just my very loud hiccup reverberating across the lab, atom puns made by a guy named Adam, and lastly, having to use actual matchsticks to light our candles. College is crazy, isn't it?

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finleigh (United States of America) reviewed:

Prologue to a novel I am writing

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Stay with this story, it's already really good and I want to continue.

about 2 years ago

finleigh (United States of America) reviewed:

Dear Future

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I really think you could take this piece to a whole new level of you expanded it, elaborated, and maybe even wrote a response. But hey, this is your story, do whatever you want with it!

about 2 years ago

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