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lostmemories

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Writing is a passion of mine– the ability to craft a world from scratch for my dreams and unspoken ideas has always been magnetizing.

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The exception to my people

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This was a lovely read, the only thing you could do is maybe add more description so that it isn't so figurative (maybe try giving more specific examples?). That's about all! Thanks for sharing!

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Autumn Rain

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She reflected on her mortal life,
Knowing that it would all be gone soon
As teardrops dripped from her glossy, grey eyes.

Rain dappled the windshield,
Pressing the fallen leaves against the glass
And kissing them softly.

There was no noise to be heard
But the water dappling the roof
And the wind caressing the shivering trees.

She sat, arms limp at her sides,
The world outside unknown, as the
Streams of water and gold-dusted leaves
Kept away the monochromatic...

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Third Jar

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I think that this poem honestly doesn't need much to be an incredible read. You could be a lil' more description/imagery of the place the narrator is, but even then, I feel like you shouldn't overdo it and bore the...

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