YayaZ (United States) published:
PROMPT: A Star is Born!
Imagine the oldest person you know. No, no, no…imagine the oldest person that your grandparents know! Hold on now, let’s go back even further. What about medieval knights, or the Romans, or even the Egyptians? They lived on the same Earth as us. Now, here’s the challenge: think about the time before the earth. What do you see? A blanket of darkness? Dancing stars? Colorful galaxies? What if I told you that scientists here on our planet Earth have found...
9 months ago
YayaZ (United States) published:
PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2020
The lushest wreaths of palms adorn your head.
The glint of ivory sands oft lace your throat.
For donned in flora never dared you shed,
Your hospitality for haughty's gloat.
With white-capped suitors bowing at your feet,
You gaily tease with shallowed, turquoise locks.
From tropic-misted veils you play discrete,
Permitting only ship-bound man to dock.
How swift the tides of friendship choose to ebb,
Left bare and raped by conquest, greed, and war.
Your monsoon tears create...
9 months ago
YayaZ (United States) published:
FREE WRITING
Listen closely, Ease.
Do you pine for me?
The one with kinky hair and dirty nails.
Laughter, stay awhile.
Do you miss my lips?
The ones with Coca-Cola flavored gloss.
Hold my hand, Daydream.
Do you think of me?
The one who conjured humored tragic tales.
Childhood, don’t leave.
Do you remember?
It is I who wept when you waved goodbye.
10 months ago
YayaZ (United States) published:
PROMPT: Star Wish
about 1 year ago
YayaZ (United States) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
I enjoyed the simplicity of the piece. However, I don't think that adding some more details (in moderation) will take away from the gentle simplicity of the story. Please keep adding to this piece! Also, thank you for having shared...
about 1 year ago
YayaZ (United States) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
You did well in immediately throwing the reader into the thick of the action. However, I think that it would be nice if you included some punctuation in your piece. Though it might be a show of creative liberty to...
about 1 year ago
YayaZ (United States) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
I liked your word choice and imagery; however, I would recommend that you add some punctuation and correct some of your spelling errors. It would be disappointing if someone missed out on reading your piece because of mistakes in language...
about 1 year ago
YayaZ (United States) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
The emotion is very vivid in this piece. You were able to convey it well with your use of imagery. As the reader, a little piece of me hopes that if there is any truth to this piece, that the...
about 1 year ago
YayaZ (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Microphone
The way the "quite" classroom shattered with ring of the bell was the best part. With all of your descriptions, the forced silence of the room was building up until it exploded when everyone shot out of the room. The...
about 1 year ago