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AJW74

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AJW74 (United Kingdom) published:

City of M.

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Her cheeks pinched in strawberry rings, the red tint growing with each new building. But enclosed in a candy floss wall. But not permanent. She blushed; the town had expanded - pink champagne flooding her peach skin. Glowing in the golden sunshine, her chocolate-brown freckles smiled, inhabiting the pink city. 


 

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I love this poem, especially how you have combined the two types or poems and the use of repetition throughout. To improve I would change the second use of the word there on the 6th line as I feel it...

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