There is so much to like about this piece. The star and space images, the diction, the syntax––you've done an amazing job with this!
PROMPT: Everyday Magic
This is really cool. It's short but thoughtful and deep, and the more I look the more I see in it. You've done an excellent job. Keep writing!
almost 2 years
Following your train of thoughts is so fascinating. The way you wrote it is so natural and simple that it drew me along and was fun to read. Excellently done!
over 2 years
This is a beautiful poem! My only suggestion would be to check punctuation, since a couple of the periods seemed like they were out of place. Other than that, you did an excellent job!
about 3 years