Jacob Barrett

New Zealand

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almost 2 years ago

Jacob Barrett (New Zealand) reviewed:

Today is the Day

PROMPT: Setting as Mood

Cool piece, please continue it! Tell us what happens next! I can't wait to read more.
Thanks,
Jacob

almost 3 years ago

Jacob Barrett (New Zealand) reviewed:

Concrete Dream

PROMPT: WILD

Really awesome piece, I enjoyed it :) Keep writing, and I look forward to reading more of your stuff!
Thanks,
Jacob

almost 3 years ago

Jacob Barrett (New Zealand) reviewed:

Be Yourself They Say.

PROMPT: Numerous Narrators

There are a few little errors (I've highlighted them), but otherwise this is a really cool piece of writing. I hope my advice was useful, and I look forward to reading more of your writing :)
Thanks,
Jacob

almost 3 years ago

Jacob Barrett (New Zealand) reviewed:

Wrinkles

FREE WRITING

Cool poem, I enjoyed reading it :) Hope you found my advice somewhat useful, and I look forward to reading more of your work.
Thanks,
Jacob

almost 3 years ago

Jacob Barrett (New Zealand) reviewed:

Music of the River

PROMPT: WILD

Considering the length of your poem, you should go back through and read it aloud to catch any errors you may have put in. For example, in that final section "The SMOOTH/indescribable sound of water is SMOOTH/Strong/Fierce/It is akin only...

almost 3 years ago

Jacob Barrett (New Zealand) reviewed:

Peace

FREE WRITING

Cool piece, I like it :) Hope to read more of your work, and I hope some of my advice is helpful (check the highlighted areas in the poem).
Merry Christmas from NZ,
Jacob

almost 3 years ago

Jacob Barrett (New Zealand) reviewed:

Ephemera

PROMPT: WILD

A really cool poem, which tons of room to get even better. I hope to read more of your work in the future, and I hope that my advice has been helpful :)
Merry Christmas from NZ,
Jacob

almost 3 years ago

Jacob Barrett (New Zealand) reviewed:

Jane

PROMPT: Open Prompt

Despite the very few issues, this is a good piece that has tons of potential. I look forward to seeing what you can do with it, and reading more of your writing in the future :) Merry Christmas from NZ,...

almost 3 years ago

Jacob Barrett (New Zealand) reviewed:

FERAL

PROMPT: WILD

There are a few grammatical issues (I've highlighted them), but otherwise a really good poem. Keep writing, I look forward to reading more of your work.
Merry Christmas from NZ,
Jacob

almost 3 years ago