2017 06 04 18.09.17

ChloeAdele

Australia

Hi, my name's Chloe Adele. I am a writer, book lover, musician and singer-songwriter from Victoria Australia.

If you like music, feel free to look me up on Spotify or Bandcamp
https://chloeadele.bandcamp.com/album/young-like-that

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Any feedback would be greatly appreciated :)

2017 06 04 18.09.17

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Cigarette Tongue

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You have a cigarette tongue
Which blows words of smoke
Watch me breathe into my lungs 
And watch me begin to choke

You see I choke on these words
That once caressed my ashen hair
And I can't swallow these words
That leave my bone behind flesh bare 

It has long grey tail 
And sweet burning taste
It dances around your fingers 
And wraps around my waist 

For this cigarette tongue
That you are so proud to possess  
Leaves...

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ChloeAdele (Australia) published:

Young Like That

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Hi, please click on this link to listen to my song :)
https://chloeadele.bandcamp.com/track/young-like-that-extended

[Verse 1]
She leaves home at 9:03,
walking on the concrete 
She forgot her coat at home 
The wind is cold, the air is thick, the night is slow 
Walks past the streets and onto the road 

[Verse 2]
Pack of cigarettes she holds,
Eyelids painted gold 
She wears her favourite party dress 
She walks in, takes a seat, takes a breath 
Big voices speak too loud...

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I love how you juxtapose beauty and gentleness against hatred. I am in awe of your writing style

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Animal Zoo

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Cigarette Tongue

You have a cigarette tongue
Which blows words of smoke
Watch me breathe into my lungs 
And watch me begin to choke

You see I choke on these words
That once caressed my ashen hair
And I can't swallow these words
That leave my bone behind flesh bare 

It has long grey tail 
And sweet burning taste
It dances around your fingers 
And wraps around my waist 

For this cigarette tongue
That you are so proud to possess  
Leaves ashes in the wind 
And ashes in my head 









 

Songwriting Competition

Young Like That

Hi, please click on this link to listen to my song :)
https://chloeadele.bandcamp.com/track/young-like-that-extended

[Verse 1]
She leaves home at 9:03,
walking on the concrete 
She forgot her coat at home 
The wind is cold, the air is thick, the night is slow 
Walks past the streets and onto the road 

[Verse 2]
Pack of cigarettes she holds,
Eyelids painted gold 
She wears her favourite party dress 
She walks in, takes a seat, takes a breath 
Big voices speak too loud in her head 

[Chorus]
Tears of honey run down her cheeks 
But she don’t mind ‘cause it tastes so sweet 
She don’t mind at all 
She don’t mind at all 
She likes the way cars go fast 
But don’t we all when we’re young like that 
She don’t mind at all 
She don’t mind at all 

[Verse]
The night doesn’t stop there,
Red ribbons in her hair 
She doesn’t want to walk alone 
Broken hearts, beaten lungs, brittle bones 
Her...

Living in Music

All Along The Watchtower- Bob Dylan

This song, which has rotated tirelessly on my fathers scratched vinyl record since I was a little girl, has always captivated me. Lost in Dylan's smooth mahogany vocals which sings of mystery and hope, I would dance with my dad in our small living room. My feet would follow the music of the guitar, and my body would move to the melody of the whining harmonica. Undeniably nostalgic, I still love to listen to this song.

What always intrigued me in this song were the characters of his story: the nervous nail biting 'joker,' and the cool, calm and collected 'thief.' In a weird way, I can see aspects of the thief in my friend, who walks with a swagger in his body and a coolness in his voice. This song also possessed so much magic, it's like I could see silver sparks of light falling from the record as it spun. I would envision a vast desert with a...

Frostbite

[Chorus]
I will brave the cold
I already know
That when we love you love to lie
Your kisses give me frostbite

[Verse 1]
Oh my god did you see a ghost?
Aren't I the girl you're meant to love the most?
But in your eyes, I'm know I'm not

Damn you and your pretty mouth
Mahogany hair and eyes of brown
Those sweet words make your teeth rot 

[Verse 2]
Oh your heart is wrapped in bone 
And your face is covered in stone
You were so soft when you were younger

I heard you made your mother cry
I can see a storm in your eye
Aren't you afraid of the thunder?

Am I still your lover?

[Chorus]
I will brave the cold
I already know
That when we love you love to lie
Your kisses give me frostbite

I will brave the cold
You already know
That when we love I love to cry
Your kisses give...

Songwriting Competition

Young Like That

Hi, please click on this link to listen to my song :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ELr_7zVv440

[Verse 1]
She leaves home at 9:03,
walking on the concrete 
She forgot her coat at home 
The wind is cold, the air is thick, the night is slow 
Walks past the streets and onto the road 

[Verse 2]
Pack of cigarettes she holds,
Eyelids painted gold 
She wears her favourite party dress 
She walks in, takes a seat, takes a breath 
Big voices speak too loud in her head 

[Chorus]
Tears of honey run down her cheeks 
But she don’t mind ‘cause it tastes so sweet 
She don’t mind at all 
She don’t mind at all 
She likes the way cars go fast 
But don’t we all when we’re young like that 
She don’t mind at all 
She don’t mind at all 

[Verse]
The night doesn’t stop there,
Red ribbons in her hair 
She doesn’t want to walk alone 
Broken hearts, beaten lungs, brittle bones 
Her...

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