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far too nonchalant about things i should probably care about
reviews pLeAsE. reviews without anything constructive are honestly a waste of your time, more than anything. be harsh or whatever when you critique me, but please do.
as for comments, they help a lot lol so if you drop a few, it would be highly appreciated.
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In conclusion, I absolutely do not have any critique to offer that could make the slightest dent into this flawless piece. Very well done, Dani!
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