agustdv

United Arab Emirates

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far too nonchalant about things i should probably care about

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reviews pLeAsE. reviews without anything constructive are honestly a waste of your time, more than anything. be harsh or whatever when you critique me, but please do.

as for comments, they help a lot lol so if you drop a few, it would be highly appreciated.

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agustdv (United Arab Emirates)() published:

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colorless agony/ this heatwave is/ enchanting/

birds overgrown/ a meadow of weeds/ and the sinking of toes/ crushed sand in empty/ colloquial mouths/ 

are you a stranger/ to the scent of/ doom?/ are you thinking/ of my/ bottomless daybreak/ words?/

god/ i have prayed/ mercilessly/ for a day like this/ to end



 
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i want to quell the numbness in my chest so i get a part-time job

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he plays the harmonica for suchi who is crying with her elbows glued to the white plastic table in the pantry, and i sit in the corner watching the tattoos on his sleeve breathe and suffocate under the weight of minimum wage. he plays the blues; mouth perched on the wind pipes, fingers pressed against the sleek metal body, eyes scrunched close. he is just trying to help her. in his own, coarse, uncouth, aggressive way, he is only...
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agustdv (United Arab Emirates)() published:

elena

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i loved you/ charcoal eyes/ my lolita/ my muse/ i loved you even/ when your lungs/ annihilated/ every inch/ of our/ desecrated destinies/ i loved you/ as moths love/ the sensual scents/ of midsummer/ moonlights/ your tomb/ calls out to/ me/ tears sticking/ to my tongue/ numb skulls/ sullied gravestones/ i cannot live/ with/ out/ you/

they say/ rotten flesh/ smells/ like/ civilizations burning/ all the world/ turned inside out/ hailstorms of boulders/ pompeii/ but you/ my love/ are an...
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agustdv (United Arab Emirates)() published:

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i am born from the land of salt marches and saffron, and learn to spin periwinkle studded fantasies in a country slick with sweat and oil. my eyes are accustomed to only two names on the atlas resting on my desk, afflicted by bathtub fingerprints and the harsh caresses of sunlight. 

a fondness for unscathed tourist shrines settles under my skin. so i turn to the inescapable lull of cinema, the reels and the blacks and whites and eyes that...
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