Amyy

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Amyy (Australia) reviewed:

The Warning

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I love your description, specifically the visual and aural imagery. It's so good. I can literally imagine everything you're describing in my head because when you describe, you're showing me, unlike other writers who merely tell. And when you describe...

over 3 years ago

Amyy (Australia) reviewed:

Water

PROMPT: Your World in Three Senses

This is only my opinion, but to enhance the sense of serene and calmness I'd add more commas to drag out the sentences, gave some examples above. I'm not sure about you but I personally would also describe how the...

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Amyy (Australia) reviewed:

Licivious

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This feels like one of the poems I've read before called Rape of the Lock where the author detailed every little thing and compared it using a lot of literary techniques. I think you've done the same here in a...

over 3 years ago

Amyy (Australia) reviewed:

Words

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You don't even describe someone, but it just makes me thing of this movie I watched where this guy is just watching a girl read a book and he can't help but smile.

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Amyy (Australia) published:

Rose

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2017


In the corner of the field, there is one Rose left amongst the wasteland of debris and ruin.

Sharp gusts of wind and a torrents of rain sweep through the area. She grows colder, weaker as the days pass. 
The stunning whiteness will wane with every passing day. She will reach out to the sun but it is no longer there. Her thin petals are made dim by the suffocating plumes of smoke as she gasps for air.
 
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Amyy (Australia) reviewed:

Sea of Corn

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This is only my opinion, but when I imagine a cornfield I imagine it to be yellow. Maybe its because of all those ads I've seen on TV where everything is yellow to get those happy vibes going. Also, this...

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