I love your description, specifically the visual and aural imagery. It's so good. I can literally imagine everything you're describing in my head because when you describe, you're showing me, unlike other writers who merely tell. And when you describe...

This is only my opinion, but to enhance the sense of serene and calmness I'd add more commas to drag out the sentences, gave some examples above. I'm not sure about you but I personally would also describe how the...

This feels like one of the poems I've read before called Rape of the Lock where the author detailed every little thing and compared it using a lot of literary techniques. I think you've done the same here in a...

You don't even describe someone, but it just makes me thing of this movie I watched where this guy is just watching a girl read a book and he can't help but smile.

This is only my opinion, but when I imagine a cornfield I imagine it to be yellow. Maybe its because of all those ads I've seen on TV where everything is yellow to get those happy vibes going. Also, this...