avgarg

United States

Hi, my name is Avni Garg and I'm a freshman at Stuyvesant high School. I love to write.
I was inspired by William Wordsworth quote "Fill your paper with breathings of your heart."

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I love to write. Most of my work is incomplete.
Many would say that like other teenagers, I have a hard time finishing a project. They would be right. Others would say that I fear commitment.
I don't fear commitment, I fear that I won't be able to handle others' reaction to my declaration. So I always adopt the former excuse than the latter.
Most teenagers would agree with me on this. Plus we are non confrontational - in a lazy sort of way. ;)
Many unusual things have been happening around me lately. Some confusing, few unpleasant. I always feel better after I write something - anything.
Thank you for reading my work. Thank you in advance for your critique.
I'm a work in progress and my possibilities are endless.

avgarg (United States) reviewed:

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This is a great piece. Clear, to the point. i can appreciate the contrast, in fact it took me by surprise

over 2 years ago

avgarg (United States) published:

Grandma

PROMPT: Monostich

Every Sunday
Sunday after Sunday
without fail, without hesitation
I would sit on a stool infront of her.

She would untie my hair
open up my braid
without fail, without hesitation
comment on how beautiful my hair was.

Beautiful hair is thick, long and dark
She said, those are the 3 things hair should be
without fail, without hesitation
no exceptions.

She would then start talking
talking in her soothing rhythmic voice
without fail, without hesitation
rhythmic sweet voice.

she...

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avgarg (United States) published:

Grandma

PROMPT: Monostich

Every Sunday
Sunday after Sunday
without fail, without hesitation
I would sit on a stool infront of her.

She would untie my hair
open up my briad
and without fail comment on how Beautiful, thick, long and dark my hair was
You see those are the 3 things hair should be - thick, long and dark
no exceptions.

She would then start talking
talking in her soothing rhythmic voice
it was a sweet voice
she would talk about everything
not...

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avgarg (United States) published:

Ghana

PROMPT: My December Writing Competition 2018


Table of contents
  • Preface: What is Ghana?
 
  • Chapter I: Where is Ghana?
    • Location
 
  • Chapter II: Ghana before colonization
    • What kind of government was present?
    • How was this place linked with other areas?
 
  • Chapter III: The European colonization.
    • When was it colonized?
    • How did it happen?
    • How was the colony used?
 
  • Chapter IV: The British Effect
    • What modifications were made?
    • What infrastructure was built?
    • How can you see the legacy of the purpose of the colony still...
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