Corbinium
United States
bah. humbug.
Message from Writer
“Well you do enough talk
My little hawk, why do you cry?
Tell me what did you learn from the Tillamook burn?
Or the Fourth of July?
We're all gonna die”
Fourth of July - Sufjan Stevens
Peer Reviews
Me and You
PROMPT: Talking to “You”
Hey so you followed me and truth be told I have no clue who this is lol... I have a few guesses but who is this??
almost 3 years
Couldn't Be True
PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2017
My only additional comment is that, for me, switch the 'he' and 'she' around. It's not very often that what you described in this piece happens to the 'he' instead. <3
almost 3 years