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Marie

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Marie (Norway) reviewed:

Chenquin

PROMPT: Monster Flash Fiction Competition 2018

The Chenquin has clear features to make it stand out as a monster, particularly child abduction and an emphasis on water. The frequent and varied references to water lend a consistent imagery to the story and also works as a...

over 1 year ago

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Marie (Norway) reviewed:

His Monster

PROMPT: Monster Flash Fiction Competition 2018

I like this. The writing is very good, and something about the story made me stop and think about it - I've had it open in a tab for awhile now. You know how to make sentences direct and strong....

over 1 year ago

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Marie (Norway) reviewed:

Before the Meeting

PROMPT: Monster Flash Fiction Competition 2018

This story has ideas, and I'd love it if you told us more about them. Especially the zombie dragon had me curious - what does it look like? Is it large? Is it rotting, and does it smell? What zombie-like...

over 1 year ago

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Marie (Norway) published:

Deteriorate

PROMPT: Monster Flash Fiction Competition 2018

She’s lying at the bottom of a staircase, unconscious and vulnerable, when the monster finds her. It slithers inside her and settles quietly. Minutes later, when she’s found by a panicked husband and brought hastily to the hospital, it’s too late.
 
The sky outside is clouded and grey. She has her husband beside her. He’s shaking, crying, breaths coming sharp and uneven. She rests her head against his trembling chest and breathes.
 
It’s not long before talking grows...

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Marie (Norway) published:

Two Cold Feet and a Warm Hand

PROMPT: Writing for Children Competition 2017

Anna is out of bed in the middle of the night.

She didn't plan to be, or anything. She just woke up and had to go to the bathroom. But she's done there now, has washed her hands and everything, so she should be going back to bed. And yet she isn't.

The reason why is that she's home alone. Her parents are out for the night. She's alone in her room in the basement, with a portrait of an...

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Marie (Norway) reviewed:

Backspace

PROMPT: Poetry Writing Competition 2015

I know you have a later draft of this poem, but this is my favorite version. It chooses exactly the right words, especially in the first and the last two paragraphs. Sheer eloquence.

over 2 years ago

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Marie (Norway) liked Backspace by Demory (United States)

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