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Electrons spin in the emptiness, pulled through space by a mysterious force. It is a solitary existence. If they happen to glimpse another electron, the force drags them apart, and they spiral in opposite directions. Like some cultish ritual, the electrons circle a large clump in the far distance; they feel its tug of general positivity, a positivity that pulls on the strongest primal desires of the little negative balls of energy. But the electrons’ predestined orbit will never lead...

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How to Have a Perfect Day

PROMPT: Writing for Children Competition 2017

    My perfect day began on a Monday in late January. I didn’t wake up knowing that my life was going to change for the better; in fact, I thought the day was going to be especially horrible. The first bad sign was when my mother woke me up for school. Here’s a short sample of what I woke up to that morning:
    “Come on, Carmen, you are going to be late again! You have twelve and a half minutes...

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swe (United States) published:

How to Have a Perfect Day

PROMPT: Writing for Children Competition 2017

    My perfect day began on a Monday in late January. I didn’t wake up knowing that my life was going to change for the better; in fact, I thought the day was going to be especially horrible. The first bad sign was when my mother woke me up for school. Here’s a short sample of what I woke up to that morning:
    “Come on, Carmen, you are going to be late again! You have twelve and a half minutes...

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Two Cold Feet and a Warm Hand

PROMPT: Writing for Children Competition 2017

I would proofread the story one more time, just to check for any typos. Great work!

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