Maryam Gamar

Canada

just a teen writer trying to raise my voice above average

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Maryam Gamar (Canada) published:

Under the Guise of Water

PROMPT: Rewilding

Orbcicle – (n.)
Bubbles of air frozen under the surface of pond or lake, generally appear larger than truth because of the contortion of the ice-lens: Finn tried to pop the orbcicles by stomping on the ice. 
 
Nimbospittle – (n.)
Perpetual drizzle of rain that is so delicate it is hard to tell when it starts or stops: the nimbospittle gradually spattered everything with a sheen of wet.
 
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almost 4 years ago

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Maryam Gamar (Canada) published:

Under the Guise of Water

PROMPT: Rewilding

Orbcicle – (n.)
1. Bubbles of air frozen under the surface of pond or lake, generally appear larger than truth because of the contortion of the ice-lens: Finn tried to pop the orbcicles by stomping on the ice.
 
Nimbospittle – (n.)
1. Perpetual drizzle of rain that is so delicate it is hard to tell when it starts or stops: the nimbospittle gradually spattered everything with a sheen of wet.
 
Seeking Peer Reviews

over 4 years ago

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The main critique I have is your use of "we" and "our". From my point of view, I differentiated two groups; the 14 year-olds, and the people asking the questions, poking, prodding and being annoying old people. But I found...

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