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eliska22

Australia

I want to write stuff and get better at it, so here I am. I enjoy reading, writing, editing and developing concepts. I have an obsession with dragons and a love for the world of fantasy and magic.

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"It's a dangerous business, Frodo, going out your door. You step onto the road, and if you don't keep your feet, there's no knowing where you might be swept off to." ~ J.R.R Tolkien, The Lord of the Rings

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This is a very good story and you use imagery very effectively. Detailed regarding language and culture, which is very good. I highly recommend a different title (one that gives an insight into what this story is about) if you...

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.... Wow.... I love it... and yet I still don't get what happened... good job! :D Try expanding your vocabulary so you can use more words to express yourself :D and play around with sentences because sometimes putting things in...

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Be You

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I applaud you for writing such a touching text. Thank you for touching my heart and brightening my day. :) Keep writing awesome stuff.

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The man who threw yellow soap

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Awesome work! :D I enjoy reading what you write.

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Songwriting Competition

Bring It Back

Poison flows into my ears.
Creativity disappears, like melting snow.
Everybody's singing monotone.
No feelings, no spirit, no emotion to be shown.
My soul is screaming, screaming, not to let it go.

Bring back my stride,
Retribution denied.
Bring me back, bring me back to how it's supposed to be.
Bring it back, bring it back to how it's supposed to be.
DON'T MAKE ME LISTEN TO THIS TRASH!

With their voices lifeless
Our generation burns
Smothered in falsified words.
Objectifying, objectifying. 
I can't let this go.
The world needs to know.

Bring back my stride,
Retribution denied.
Bring me back, bring me back to how it's supposed to be.
Bring it back, bring it back to how it's supposed to be.
DON'T MAKE ME LISTEN TO THIS TRASH!

The future is murdering my ears,
Hope lost through these young years.
Hypnotised, hypnotised.
The past is receding,
My eyes are bleeding.
No meaning, no meaning.

Bring back my stride,
Retribution...

Songwriting Competition

Bring It Back


Poison flows into my ears.
Creativity disappears, like melting snow.
Everybody's singing monotone.
No feelings, no spirit, no emotion to be shown.
My soul is screaming, screaming, not to let it go.

Bring back my stride,
Retribution denied.
Bring me back, bring me back to how it's supposed to be.
Bring it back, bring it back to how it's supposed to be.
DON'T MAKE ME LISTEN TO THIS TRASH!

With their voices lifeless
Our generation burns
Smothered in falsified words.
Objectifying, objectifying. 
I can't let this go.
The world needs to know.

Bring back my stride,
Retribution denied.
Bring me back, bring me back to how it's supposed to be.
Bring it back, bring it back to how it's supposed to be.
DON'T MAKE ME LISTEN TO THIS TRASH!

The future is murdering my ears,
Hope lost through these young years.
Hypnotised, hypnotised.
The past is receding,
My eyes are bleeding.
No meaning, no meaning.

Bring back my stride,
Retribution...

Headless

A face contorted into a gruesome scowl rolls across the dust settled on wooden floorboards. A slow steady drip begins, breaking the silence of the dark room. Within the pitch black, hands fumble at their neck, confused in their search for a vital body part. That vital body part which is now rolling across the floor.
 "You won't be needing this, will you, Headless?" hisses a mocking male voice from within the darkness, an everlasting darkness for the figure lacking the weight of a head upon his neck. The man ungracefully grasps the head's hair before tossing it across the large empty room. A dull splat and thud rebound through the atmosphere. Hands grasp at their throat, searching for a voice only to find a wet stump. Headless shuffles forwards, air wheezing through his throat. Why won't he die?
"Such a sorry sight!" exclaims a woman, audibly dissatisfied by what she sees. "And you call this entertainment? What kind...

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The Innocent's Terror

Small black eyes peer out from the comfort of darkness. Outside, all was silent, apart from the vicious prolonged howls under the shadow of moonlight. A slight shiver travels down the rodents furry nape. Nothing could destroy its strong humble abode, and yet its teeth chitter, discomforted by the eerie night. Ignoring the silence cast down on the world, the rodent rips at the grass, gaining assurance from the green juices running down its fluffy chin. Suddenly, the rodent pauses, frozen in place. Low hungry growls resonate through the pale black landscape, drawing near. The rodents puny heart clatters nervously around its chest, inhaling quick short breaths of the cool nights air. Slowly, the soft padding of paws come closer. The rodent, at full alertness, remains still as the beasts rasping breaths tickle its twitching nose. But the rodents house was an impregnable fortress of steel and wood, no beast could possibly break in. The rodents round dark eyes glance...

Synchronized Sounds

Monday Mornings

Monday mornings enticingly enchant simple souls which wait for fortune to travel by, beguilingly picking pockets as animals emerge encased with warmth. Unbelievably, unsatisfied yammering youths lack love for fantastic Monday mornings, harbouring hate towards the pending pain to take place. Perhaps, the tranquility fortified for weekends would be better preciously preserved if irritating Monday mornings aren't approved for fatiguing evil education.  

The Flow

Cascading, enveloped, I am submerged.
No sight, no voice, no sound, only the silence and the flow.
The flow dances enticingly across my paper, unrestricted by the edges;
The flow playfully tugs at my hand, asking for order.
Freedom to flow; ink stains my palms and my eyes
As the sky full of letters, words and phrases falls,
Down into the very book I hold with shaking hands.
Images of the past wash over, the flow claiming, forming, rising...
The gentle tug at my mind, it guides me,
Evolving, growing, invigorating the expanse in my head.


 

Yee

Within a single moment, I was struck with awe as the little dinosaur on my screen sang it's tune. The scene, unmoving, only the mouth singing away. Just as suddenly as the video had begun, a new dinosaur was on-screen, plainly stating the glorious phrase of "Yee!"

Creature View

The Innocent's Terror

Small black eyes peer out from the comfort of darkness. Outside, all was silent, apart from the vicious prolonged howls under the shadow of moonlight. A slight shiver travels down the rodents furry nape. Nothing could destroy its strong humble abode, and yet its teeth chitter, discomforted by the eerie night. Ignoring the silence cast down on the world, the rodent rips at the grass, gaining assurance from the green juices running down its fluffy chin. Suddenly, the rodent pauses, frozen in place. Low hungry growls resonate through the pale black landscape, drawing near. The rodents puny heart clatters nervously around its chest, inhaling quick short breaths of the cool nights air. Slowly, the soft padding of paws come closer. The rodent, at full alertness, remains still as the beasts rasping breaths tickle its twitching nose. But the rodents house was an impregnable fortress of steel and wood, no beast could possibly break in. The rodents round dark eyes glance...

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