bride124

United States of America

Writing is a big part of me and my daily life. I want to share it with the world so I joined this website. (P.S: I like followers and to do/receive peer reviews). A INCREDIBLE PIECE: https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/
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I love film, television, books, along with writing. I hope you enjoy my stories.

Peer Reviews

The Land of Lost Things--Part Three

FREE WRITING

I cannot wait for Part 4. Great job!

5 months

Amalgam of Yoga and Karate

FREE WRITING

Great job! Keep on writing!

5 months

Learning to Thrive with Food Allergies

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2019

6 months

I Am No Longer Bound

FREE WRITING

I am glad that you are no longer bound!

6 months

My Life is Perfect and That's Part of the Pain #MentalHealthMonth

FREE WRITING

You are a talented writer! I am very glad that I reviewed this!

6 months

Karin

FREE WRITING

Keep on writing! It is evidently paying off!

6 months

Anugwa: Prologue

FREE WRITING

Other than my critiques in my highlights, this was a pretty good prologue!

6 months

The Land of Lost Things

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition 2019

Your writing is INCREDIBLE! I think that you truly have a gift, but I am honestly just explaining some flaws in this piece. I hope you don't hate me!

6 months

and time moves on, chapter one

FREE WRITING

This is fantastic. You can leave a comment below but I'll probably be too busy reading Chapter 2 :)

6 months

The Land of Lost Things--Part Two

FREE WRITING

This is a pretty good piece! 10/10! Hopefully this becomes a published novel!

6 months

Equivalent

PROMPT: Dictionary Title

It was a really great piece but I still have a lot of questions. What did Justify see? What was the mistake? Why was the numbers for? What do they represent? What was Justify in line for? I don't know, it just feels unfinished. Keep on writing!

6 months

angels just remind us mortals we never get a chance to fly (Edited)

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You have a lot of talent. Despite all of my minor critiques, since you asked. I am going to tell you why everybody like this piece. With a great display of setting and characteristics of the protagonist, the visual and sensory details are outstanding with great character development in such a short time. Although the timeline may not be super long, you gave us readers a remarkable plot that we will never forget. Keep on writing!

6 months

Chapter One: 3...2...1

FREE WRITING

Janae is a lovely character, in a lovely piece. Keep on writing!

6 months

this is me

PROMPT: Open Prompt

I am at a lost for words on this piece. Keep on writing and stay fantastic!

6 months

I Wonder

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I would advise you give more detail and better word choice sprinkle some new vocabulary) but overall, it was cute and youthful, so it was very pleasant.

6 months

(No Name)

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Great title! I recommend to add more details in the future, but overall, it was pretty good!

6 months

Bulletproof

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I would recommend trying to shorten the small talk or the unnecessary details. The little dialogue in the middle of the paragraph can be perceived as minimal and trivial. Thanks for creating this piece!

6 months

love feels

FREE WRITING

"Love Feels" is a romantic yet realistic piece that I thoroughly enjoyed. Good job!

6 months

Leaving Refuge

PROMPT: Refuge

It is my pleasure reviewing this piece. I am glad you made it.

6 months

My Sky

FREE WRITING

Fantastic piece!

6 months

The Words to an Escape

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Every word on here is very true. Thanks for writing this!

6 months

Feed Me More!

PROMPT: Bread and Light

This was a great piece! You nailed the prompt!

6 months

"Going down?"

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It seems like a very relax story until the last couple paragraphs. I recommend you work more on being strict, to the point. Keep on writing!

6 months

Drowning

FREE WRITING

This is a incredible piece!

6 months

Wake Up

FREE WRITING

Keep on writing!

7 months

until then: open letters to my younger self

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I have so much other things to say about this piece that I cannot express. This was great and I hope you know how incredible this piece is.

7 months

The Horror Within

FREE WRITING

It is fantastic. I can already see that the rest of the story is going to be amazing! (P.S: I am still going to review your other piece that you recommended on June 6th!)

6 months

Life

FREE WRITING

Good work!

7 months

A Magical World

PROMPT: Library Magic

What a magical piece!

7 months

Music- The Lifesaver

FREE WRITING

Keep on writing!

7 months

Dreams Change

FREE WRITING

Nice work!

7 months

LISTEN

PROMPT: #ListenFirst

What a remarkable piece! You truly are a budding author!

7 months

The British Era

PROMPT: History Alive

Honestly, you are a fantastic writer. This is pure, raw, and convincing evidence of it!

7 months

do the shadows know where you've gone?

FREE WRITING

Awesome work! While reviewing your works, it makes me truly know that you are a terrific writer. Keep on writing!

8 months

The Wonders of Winter

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Awesome work! You are a fantastic writer!

8 months

I Didn't Realize-

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Awesome work!

8 months

Perfect

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Great work! You are perfect just the way you are!

8 months

My Second Contest #sweetlybitter LAST DAY FOR ENTRIES!!!

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Have fun! I hope you have many participants!

7 months

#escapril who am i?

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Great work!

7 months

chocolate sky

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Great work!

8 months

God's Will

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Nice work! Keep on writing!

8 months

random shoutout to 2 people :D

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Nice information!

8 months

Hear My Cry

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2019

I honestly think that you are a fantastic writer and that you are a worthy candidate for the competition!

8 months

Immigrant Song

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2019

Is this a true story? Brilliant piece!

8 months

Aesthetic #escapril

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Great work! (looking forward to your contest!)

8 months

where do the popular kids go

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What a delightful poem! You are a talented writer!

8 months

Dreams

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2019

I hope you sincerely keep writing! Great work! (P.S: I wouldn't usually nag about capitalization but it is a review so...)

8 months

Les

FREE WRITING

The conclusion was SO lovely! It wasn't too much of a cliffhanger or too summed up, it was very intriguing! I recommend you entering my contest: https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/108155/version/206198. Anyway, you should definitely keep writing!

8 months

there is no destroying a goddess #bigcolor

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I would recommend writing a sequel. Fantastic job! It was so emotional and a piece out of this world. I really hope you continue to write.

8 months

My Partner in Crime was Arrested

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It was a lovely tale to read. What a great entry for my contest!

9 months

even the medic couldn't fix his own broken heart (FRIEND)

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Your writing is out of this world!

9 months

100 Roses, but you don't get a single One #onlyonehundred

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it was very detailed and concise. It was great!

9 months

In My Loneliness

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I hope things get better. I really love this piece!

9 months

Mesmerized #ghostlycontest

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I adore this piece. Keep writing!

9 months

Contest Time! #Feathers

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I can't wait to start!

9 months

Hearts' Embrace.

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It was really intriguing. Good work!

10 months

powerless

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It was a fantastic read!

10 months

introduction+how to join

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I am thinking of joining the club! It sounds very fun!

11 months

Suspicious #plottwist

PROMPT: Plot Twist

It was a great writing piece with a awesome plot twist!

11 months

Life As We Know It

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I like this story! Fantastic work!

11 months

slow burn

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It was so concise and riveting. I liked it a lot.

11 months

another

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I love the repetition of "i wait, and i wait, and i wait"! It emphasizes how long she is waiting.

11 months

Compulsive- spoken word

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Great work!

11 months

when you threw a book at me

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I love the usage of personification in this piece. It makes the story more creative. It was a intriguing read. Thanks a lot!

11 months

Can't Forgive, Can't Forget

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It took me a while to read but when I finished, I thoroughly enjoyed the conclusion. You should make a sequel.

11 months

Matchstick

PROMPT: Writing Small

Superb writing!

11 months

Dear Demons

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11 months

The Perfect Way to Have A Breakup

PROMPT: Plot Twist

11 months

Art

PROMPT: Tiny Love Story

What a intriguing read! Thanks!

11 months

Ask the Writer Answers

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11 months

​Semi-permeable

PROMPT: Strike

This is a amazing read!

11 months

A Crazy Old Fool

PROMPT: Plot Twist

Is there a sequel? Because I feel like this story is not over. Great work!

11 months

A Writer’s Life For Me

PROMPT: Writing Resolutions

I hope you fulfill your goals.

11 months

{It Goes On}

FREE WRITING

Great work!

11 months

The Ingredients for a Good Year

PROMPT: 2019

I love the directions to put all the different emotions and feelings together to use them all in one year. Good work!

11 months

On The Ice

PROMPT: Your World in Three Senses

Since you already add so much description maybe add a plot to it or something. Just do not get so caught up with the extravagant words but maybe add some characters and some more story into it, in my opinion.

about 2 years

Needle And Thread

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2017

I would say to be more specific since the text was a little vague. However, the interest took the piece to a whole new level!

11 months

The Recommitment

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I love the feeling of emptiness in the beginning of the poem. It helps throughout the piece to advance to a climax and a resolution perfectly.

11 months

The Flow

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over 2 years