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Phoebe

United States

A 16 year old girl who is really passionate about her writing and making stories come alive.

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Please don't hold back when reviewing me! I honestly love feedback and equally love criticism. I need to improve so I don't mind. Give me the good and bad, and tell me how you felt reading it. :)

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Phoebe (United States) published:

I Dreamed Of You

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The world had flipped upside down for me. Quite literally.

I stand on the floor, which was the ceiling. So I am technically standing on the ceiling. I think.

Just thinking about the situation I’m in makes my head spin. I know this is a dream. But as I streak my fingers along the fluffy clouds, it seems all too real.

“Well, maybe it is real.” I swing my head towards the new voice. A little Asian girl, with peachy...

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about 3 years ago

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Phoebe (United States) published:

To Save the World

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My fingers wrap around Kelly’s throat, to snap it. The girl I love lays there, her skin still having a warm copper even though warmth was trying to leave her body.

The cars lift in the air as they twirl. The winds slap buildings as they rock back and forth, sending shards of glass flying towards citizens. This wasn’t supposed to happen. My girlfriend wasn’t supposed to be here.

We were in the middle of a hurricane. A hurricane that...

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about 3 years ago

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Phoebe (United States) reviewed:

Mother's Tale

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition 2015

Also let me just say you're descriptions are wonderful. I'd also say the voice of the mother is pretty strong, and showing more of her emotions and thoughts will give a stronger voice. Or any character in general.

about 3 years ago

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Phoebe (United States) liked This is Not a "Coming Out" Story by Hannah Kuduk (United States)

about 3 years ago

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Phoebe (United States) published:

Lunch with the Devil

PROMPT: Open Prompt

The devil sits there, black hat tipped donned with a suave black checkered suit. He has a red tie that falls slightly off the table. He smiles at me.

Around us, everything stills for a moment.

"So, I ask you, Rachel. Will you listen to my offer?" His voice slithers around like a snake, smothering me.

No one moves, and it's as if a bubble encases us. I'm really here, really involved with the devil. The man I desperately tried...

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about 3 years ago

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Phoebe (United States) published:

Breakfast with the Devil

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Devil POV

The devil had the chance to become an 'angel' for once. What foolishness.

The angel had thrown down a watch, displaying a woman. She is white, with pearly skin. Her golden hair falls gently down her shoulder, and she smiles with her heart shaped lips. The epitome of beauty, some mortals would say.

But I see nothing but plainness. Looks meant nothing. It was the soul that mattered.

My hands circled the watch. A name appeared in bright...

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about 3 years ago

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Phoebe (United States) reviewed:

Tension In The Car

FREE WRITING

about 3 years ago

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Phoebe (United States) reviewed:

I Never Made It to the Interview

PROMPT: Polar Opposite:

I think the ending was rather abrupt and odd. Did she just kidnapped? The first thought that came to my mind was she got taken by a sex trafficker, or of course, a kidnapper. Honestly it confuses as to what...

about 3 years ago

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Phoebe (United States) liked Infernia by Zoe G. (United States)

about 3 years ago

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