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feathermoons

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feathermoons (United States) published:

Springtime

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I’ve grown up in the meadow,
Sang in the warm, spring air,
Slept under the clear sky,
Danced in the freezing rain,
Skipped with the bright flowers,
Ran through the tall grass
But it has been winter for so many years,
I spend my days inside,
Longing,
Shivering,
Dying,
But as I grow old,
I feel the sun slowly rise,
The snow begins to melt,
And the bright flowers begin to bloom,
As I join the tall grass,
To sleep...

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feathermoons (United States) reviewed:

As Times Change

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I really enjoyed it! This might just be a single paragraph, but it sounds like a really good prompt for a short story or full-length novel!

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feathermoons (United States) reviewed:

Wonder

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Everything is basically beautiful except for that second line! I highlighted it and added a comment.

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feathermoons (United States) published:

Resistance

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There are three dark fences,
In my large town,
All tall with metal bars,
And wires swagging down,

In the center of my town,
Is the great large City,
This is where the government,
Looks all pretty,

A fence bounds the City,
And behind that fence,
Is my poor town,
Where we’re starving needing cents,

A fence surrounds the village,
And beyond even that,
Is farmlands stretching to the horizon,
Where the land is flat,

A fence surrounds the farmlands, ...

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Springtime

I’ve grown up in the meadow,
Sang in the warm, spring air,
Slept under the clear sky,
Danced in the freezing rain,
Skipped with the bright flowers,
Ran through the tall grass
But it has been winter for so many years,
I spend my days inside,
Longing,
Shivering,
Dying,
But as I grow old,
I feel the sun slowly rise,
The snow begins to melt,
And the bright flowers begin to bloom,
As I join the tall grass,
To sleep under the sky once more.

Resistance

There are three dark fences,
In my large town,
All tall with metal bars,
And wires swagging down,

In the center of my town,
Is the great large City,
This is where the government,
Looks all pretty,

A fence bounds the City,
And behind that fence,
Is my poor town,
Where we’re starving needing cents,

A fence surrounds the village,
And beyond even that,
Is farmlands stretching to the horizon,
Where the land is flat,

A fence surrounds the farmlands,
But no one’s ever been,
Do you think I could go?
For would it be a sin?

Tree Haiku

Trees an emerald green
Swaying in the fresh, cool breeze
With scent of fresh wood

Cold

My toes are cold, my hands are numb,
I think I’m swelling in my thumb,
I’m bundled up in my warm coat,
I’m really hurting in my throat,
I shiver, quiver and shake and freeze,
I’m falling down onto my knees,
I’m so upset that Winter’s here,
I’m going red in my right ear,
And soon enough I’ll go inside,
Where with my blanket I can hide,
This weathers making me loco,
Thank god I have my hot cocoa.

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The Deepest Parts by wonder on the other side

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America by Luna Lemon

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Resistance by feathermoons

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Cold

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