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Ode To The Broken Girl

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There's a guest in me
A guest that has named themselves Anxiety
And suddenly I'm too blind to see
That I? I am sick
And those around me must be thick 
To think that I am alive and well for the exterior 
Is not what my interior hides
I try 
And fail 
To find a happiness that doesn't exist 
I am but hollow tree stump that lives to resist
The help from those who tell me they care

And suddenly I...

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Unravel Me - Spoken Word

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Beware, for it’s in Wonderland you step, faces lit while the conjugation of a thousand words grace your ears, as I take deep, calming breaths...

Pray tell, what do you see in me, as I stand up here and berate you all with thoughts of melancholy and my mind’s downfall. I ask of you, what do you see in me, do you see the years of elation,
a child’s dream come true as I dance in fields of tulips
Emotions...

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Ode To The Broken Girl

There's a guest in me
A guest that has named themselves Anxiety
And suddenly I'm too blind to see
That I? I am sick
And those around me must be thick 
To think that I am alive and well for the exterior 
Is not what my interior hides
I try 
And fail 
To find a happiness that doesn't exist 
I am but hollow tree stump that lives to resist
The help from those who tell me they care

And suddenly I am no longer me
But the she that they want me to be
I know nothing but pain in my heart
The emptiness that starts 
To consume and fume and suddenly I have no room
I am filled up with regrets
Depressed
My mistakes live in houses inside my head 
And each night I go round the block
Trick or treating for memories 
That hide in me 
And suddenly
I - can’t - stop.

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Unravel Me - Spoken Word

Beware, for it’s in Wonderland you step, faces lit while the conjugation of a thousand words grace your ears, as I take deep, calming breaths...

Pray tell, what do you see in me, as I stand up here and berate you all with thoughts of melancholy and my mind’s downfall. I ask of you, what do you see in me, do you see the years of elation,
a child’s dream come true as I dance in fields of tulips
Emotions not yet forced into a prepubescent probation

Let’s take a trip through the mind of a girl twice forgotten,
Pain rising as feelings are brought to light
As 3 years of hiding are now diminished as I tell you myself
In my sight

I see a girl who was taught to hate herself, was taught to find the unique parts of herself insane
Taught to find her feelings and bottle them think nothing of them but vile things; vain

I...

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