Maggie Mills

United States of America

A steadfast defender of the Oxford comma

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Maggie Mills (United States of America) published:

​Dear Sister

PROMPT: Signing Off

    A lot of people say that thirteen is a bad year.  Teenagers are entitled brats; selfish, rude, distant.  They understand very little, but of course, would never believe you if you told them so.  Mom received warnings from fellow parents: Oh thirteen?  Good luck.  Or maybe no words at all, just a firm pat on the shoulder.  When you turned thirteen, however, I saw no manifestations of any sort of teenage attitude.  All I can say is that I...

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over 2 years ago

Maggie Mills (United States of America) reviewed:

Procrastination Man: Chapter One

FREE WRITING

Great work! A few things to think about as you revise: First, I think that adding some more context to the robbery could help readers understand what's happening. For example, what do the robbers look like? Are they tall? Thin?...

almost 3 years ago

Maggie Mills (United States of America) reviewed:

Crisp Autumn Morning

PROMPT: Setting as Mood

Nice work! I love the imagery and tactile description that you use in this. For example, phrases like "dew covered grass" or "leaves crunch" are really great because they help the reader feel more present in your story. As you...

almost 3 years ago

Maggie Mills (United States of America) reviewed:

Her Father's House

PROMPT: Setting as Mood

Nice work! I really like the way you convey both grief and acceptance, two really emotional stages after someone's death. The way that you tied the two together was seamless, and I loved the way that you never straight-up told...

almost 3 years ago

Maggie Mills (United States of America) earned a badge Master Reviewer

almost 3 years ago

Maggie Mills (United States of America) reviewed:

Thief

FREE WRITING

Nice work! I love the way that you kept the true actions of the main character hidden throughout the piece. A few things to keep in mind as you revise: First, try adding some setting to this piece. Is it...

almost 3 years ago

Maggie Mills (United States of America) reviewed:

United States of American Contradictions

PROMPT: Ten Words to You

Nice job! I love the way that you made this feel personal and universal by keeping your specific emotions concealed. I can tell that you care about the country, but also worry for it sometimes, and being able to convey...

almost 3 years ago

Maggie Mills (United States of America) reviewed:

The Tree

PROMPT: My December Competition 2017

Nice work! I think as you revise, focusing on adding more thematic material throughout your piece could be helpful. How could you convey the morals you discuss in the final paragraphs within the story itself?

almost 3 years ago

Maggie Mills (United States of America) reviewed:

Lost Forever

PROMPT: Setting as Mood

Great job! I love the layering of emotions in this piece, and as a reader, I could really understand what Marissa was going through. I also liked your use of present tense. I usually am not a huge fan because...

almost 3 years ago

Maggie Mills (United States of America) liked My Christmas Angel by Flynn Smith (United States of America)

almost 3 years ago