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Hallie3364

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Hello! I'm a sixteen year old aspiring author (hopefully that works out.) I hope you enjoy my writing! I have an instagram for my work as well, @halwrites, so check that out too, if you'd like :) Thank you!

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Hallie3364 (United States) published:

Shoulder Buddies

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Having a shoulder buddie is a different kind of adventure.
At first, it’s blinding pain.
It’s fire in your throat and oceans in your eyes.
It’s relearning how to live again with a different kind of weight.
And damn is it heavy.
It’s being frustrated at your deteriorating memory.
And their decomposing body.
It’s running through every situation and conversation.
And wondering what you could’ve done different.
It’s trying to find someone or something to blame.
And blaming yourself.

It’s...

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Ready When You Are

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I truly believe that this piece has the potential to be something amazing, if you took the time to expand and brain storm off of it. Please continue doing amazing work!

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Hallie3364 (United States) published:

Doused Candles

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    In a storm, power is fleeting. Hypothetically, the electricity cuts out, room to room and the family races to light the candles before the house is left dark as death. Depending on how large the family is, the family might be faster. However, sometimes they’re not. And the electricity flees from their grasp.
    Mae’s father explained the cancer rapidly infiltrating his body like a power outage. It was nowhere near as vivid, but that matters not. The sickness had been...

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Hallie3364 (United States) published:

Belladonna

PROMPT: Turned to Stone

The first of the Belladonna murders was flawless and abnormal. No traces, no notes, no evidence. Even the woman's body had a flawless cut on her throat. The abnormally continued due to the eerily beautiful bouquet of midnight blue Belladonna flowers placed carefully in the pool of blood seeping from the woman's throat. It wasn't until the third murder that the killings were known as the Belladonna Murders. It was by the fourth murder that they realized the true peril...

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Hallie3364 (United States) published:

Sister Stars

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In a galaxy too far for any human to encounter, three sister stars were born: Dawn, Day, and Dusk. They each were the heirs to the sky, however only one sister could rule. So, their limits were tested. Day, the brightest of the sisters emitted a glorious blue, so magnificent that her power shined on Earth and farther past. Dusk proved to be the second strongest, casting a magnificent darkness over her sisters jovial glow, leaving only minuscule flecks of...

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I remember white

PROMPT: I Remember

I remember when I first walked into the hospital, everything was white. I remember the white latex gloves and white cotton gown that I was enforced to wear. I remember the white walls of my father's room, how I wished there was a painting to draw the eye. I remember the white of his sheets, the tubes sticking in his arms, the white monitors beeping lazily. I remember the pigment in my fathers skin had gone white from illness. I...

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