lilytw (United States) published:
PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019
Mitch likes Clara, likes the way she wears pink on Valentine’s Day, orange on Halloween. He likes how her voice slurs when she’s excited, likes how her ponytail bobs when she laughs. He likes the tingly feeling he gets when she taps him on the shoulder to ask if he finished the Latin translations. Mitch sometimes considers asking Clara if she’d like to be the first giggly sophomore girl to ride shotgun in his second-hand station wagon. That’s just it...
over 1 year ago
lilytw (United States) published:
PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019
Mitch supposes he likes Clara. He likes the way she wears pink on Valentine’s Day, green on Saint Patrick’s Day. He likes how her breath feels warm on the nape of his neck when she leans over her desk and asks him if he did last night’s Latin translations. Mitch sometimes considers asking Clara if she’d like to be the first wide-eyed, giggly sophomore to ride shotgun in his beat-up, second hand station wagon. But that’s just it though, even...
over 1 year ago
lilytw (United States) published:
PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2017
You told me it wouldn't work because I am milk and kittens. Because I am strawberry bubblegum breath and tea, not coffee. That's a lie. It's because I'm afraid of merging onto the interstate at rush hour. Because it's not funny to me when your parents call cigarettes dinner, their elbows splayed on that stupid, red checkered tablecloth, that stupid, picnic tablecloth. Because I cringe when they hoist your brother up like a sack of potatoes, his fat, baby head...
about 2 years ago
lilytw (United States) published:
PROMPT: Personal Narrative Competition 2018
During the winter of my twelfth year, I officially became old enough to check myself into the doctor’s office. My mother didn’t waste time reminiscing over my childhood. Instead, she lounged in the car, feet propped on the dash, flipping through the glossy pages of gossip magazines. Well, at least that’s what I imagined her doing. The air in the pediatrics department is laced with stranger’s germs. To my right, a girl with a head cold sneezes. Her brother sniffles...
over 2 years ago
lilytw (United States) reviewed:
PROMPT: Science Fiction Competition 2018
It might be worthwhile to check some of your mechanics. The second sentence of your narrative, "especially if you haven't slept for a while" is a fragment.
over 2 years ago
lilytw (United States) liked Milk and Kittens by lilytw (United States)
over 3 years ago
lilytw (United States) published:
PROMPT: Talking to “You”
over 3 years ago
lilytw (United States) liked Tears of Gold by Kaitlyn ❄ (United States)
over 3 years ago
lilytw (United States) liked Silence by GraceClare (Australia)
over 3 years ago