Queenofthenight

secretofthenight

United States

everyone has secrets and sometimes they're hard to keep, but sometimes admitting them through cryptic poems and stories makes it a little better... at least for me

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Every secret of a writer’s soul, every experience of his life, every quality of his mind, is written large in his works -- Virginia Woolf

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secretofthenight (United States) published:

The girl

PROMPT: Open Prompt

I am the girl, 
    who sits with the crowd 
    yet rarely talks to anyone 
I am the girl,  
    who studies everyone she meets 
    yet never has the right words 
I am the girl,  
    who wishes she could speak  
    yet is too afraid to try  
I am the girl who keeps everything inside because she's scared to trust. 

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secretofthenight (United States) published:

Ready or Not

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"Ready or not, here I come"

But no one comes
While I wait 
In a dark spot

But no one comes
While I pray
In my hiding spot

But no one comes
While I cry
In the small room

But no one comes 

I wait, I pray, I cry
But no one comes

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secretofthenight (United States) published:

falling through the cracks

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my mother always told me,
a moment is what you make it
whether it's happy or not, 
entirely depends on you
but when it came time to choose, 
i let my fear overtake me, 
when i needed to be brave
or strong 
or just better than i was,
i didn't stand on my own two feet 
when you asked me to have hope
when you silently pleaded with me
to have faith
i broke down and hid
you had to...

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secretofthenight (United States) reviewed:

i've always said

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Your spacing and organization of the whole piece are good, but for me what really stuck out was the last stanza because it almost seems desperate and lost. I recently lost my grandmother and I felt a lot like this,...

3 months ago

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secretofthenight (United States) reviewed:

loving my bestfriend.

PROMPT: Tiny Love Story

I like how vulnerable the speaker is in this and I like how this just seems like they're really baring their heart. I do want to mention though, there are a couple of grammatical errors that could be fixed. Thanks...

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secretofthenight (United States) published:

focus on what's in front of you

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breathe in
breathe out

"focus on what's in front of you"

right foot
left foot

"focus on what's in front of you"

dont show fear
dont show weakness

"focus on what's in front of you"

you are strong
you are brave

"focus on what's in front of you."

everyday i have to remind myself 

"focus on what's in front of you"

everyday i have to try harder

"focus on what's in front of you"

everyday i have to move forward

"focus on what's in front of you."

nothing...

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