Peer Reviews
A Blessing and a Curse
PROMPT: Personal Narrative Competition 2018
I love your beginning! :))
over 2 years
IF YOU HAVE A PIECE BASED ON ONE OF THESE THREE VALUES: LOVE, POSITIVITY AND HOPE, HERE’S THE CHANCE TO SHARE IT!!!! RESPONSES ARE NEEDED!!
FREE WRITING
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Finding Da Wae: Da Resistance
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Nice piece :)) Maybe, in my opinion(please don't feel the need to conform to it if you disagree to my style), the last line would be more impactful if you said "or that was what I thought until I saw..." / "or that was what I thought until I saw a shadow" You have a unique writing style and I love it :)
almost 4 years