Heyyitzme

New Zealand

When I haven't got my face shoved in a book you can usually find me writing pages of wonders.

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Oh hi there!! When giving feedback be completely honest, no mater how harsh.

Heyyitzme (New Zealand) liked Self-confidence (spoken word poetry) by Chloe Lee (Singapore)

12 months ago

Heyyitzme (New Zealand) reviewed:

SHE

PROMPT: Phenomenal Woman

I absolutely love how you described the physical and emotional side of the 'she' in this story. Your words have a very majestic flow and is beautiful to read aloud.

about 1 year ago

Heyyitzme (New Zealand) liked SHE by person random (United States)

about 1 year ago

Heyyitzme (New Zealand) liked I made it by Heyyitzme (New Zealand)

over 1 year ago

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Heyyitzme (New Zealand) published:

I made it

PROMPT: Turned to Stone

The blood and my tears match in pace. Equal in speed, equal in pain, and both caused by someone else. The trees laugh at me, for my foolish escape, but I don’t know why because at least I got out.. 

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over 1 year ago

Heyyitzme (New Zealand) liked The Man by Puppet_Master (Australia)

over 1 year ago

Heyyitzme (New Zealand) liked ~ Change ~ by Heyyitzme (New Zealand)

over 1 year ago

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Heyyitzme (New Zealand) published:

~ Change ~

PROMPT: Open Prompt

His arms around me,
turned into a straight jacket.
Our bed that we once shared,
turned into a white room of my own.
His screams of joy,
turned into my screams of pain.
And somehow,
he still says nothing changed.

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over 1 year ago

Heyyitzme (New Zealand) reviewed:

Contradictions - short poem

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I love this piece just how it is, it's not too long, not too short and overall near perfect :)

over 1 year ago

Heyyitzme (New Zealand) liked My Love by Heyyitzme (New Zealand)

over 1 year ago