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Uni Student Studying Marketing//Fond of imaginative, fresh content, with a dash of magic and whimsy//Less fond of literary snobs

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Write the World Editor (United States) reviewed:

The Fields

PROMPT: Living Locales

I've really enjoyed reading this piece. You have great talent, and your writing really stood out to me--that's why I took the time to leave a review! You seem to understand the rhythm of words, the connotations attached to them,...

about 1 year ago

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Write the World Editor (United States) reviewed:

Baby Blue Rainboots

PROMPT: Mystery Writing Competition 2017

This is a very solid piece, so there's very little that needs to be revised. If you have any wiggle room with your word count, you might add a bit more foreshadowing in your first scene. Maybe add a few...

about 1 year ago

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Write the World Editor (United States) reviewed:

The American Grocery Crisis

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2015

I really enjoyed reading this piece, and I wish you luck in the contest! I wish I could give you some more advice, but this entry is already very well written!

over 2 years ago

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Write the World Editor (United States) reviewed:

Recipe for December Fun!

PROMPT: My December 2016

I really thought this concept was original, and I especially enjoyed the directions at the end. However, I would like to know if there are any other unique traditions you participate in during December. The things you listed were great,...

over 2 years ago

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Write the World Editor (United States) reviewed:

Pushed from the Zoo

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I really, really like the concept here! So much, in fact, that I'd love to see it expanded. You have lovely way of phrasing things, and you also create a very sympathetic character with a compelling desire. This is a...

over 2 years ago

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Write the World Editor (United States) reviewed:

When The Tree Loses Its Roots

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I really enjoyed reading this piece! I noticed a few things, however, that you could improve on. They're all easily corrected! :) In you dialogue, you often lumped everyone's lines together in one paragraph, which is difficult to follow. Make...

over 2 years ago

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Write the World Editor (United States) reviewed:

Lost

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2015

I enjoyed reading your piece, Katie! Please continue working on your craft--it's wonderful that you have started so young. I wish you the best of luck!

over 2 years ago

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Write the World Editor (United States) reviewed:

The Woods

PROMPT: Returning

This is a wonderful, reflective piece. It's categorized as flash fiction, but I can also see this developing into a great personal essay. (Definitely look back at this if you need to write a college admission essay in the future)....

over 2 years ago

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Write the World Editor (United States) liked Matecumbe by C.R. (United States)

over 2 years ago

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Write the World Editor (United States) reviewed:

Final Draft of College Essay

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In your opening paragraph, I can see that you were trying to open up with a broad meaning of failure and then tried to focus in on *your* idea of failure, but you are only allowed so many words for...

over 2 years ago