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Lauren Deegan

Australia

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Lauren Deegan (Australia) published:

A Bottle of Love

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have your ever wanted to bootle a feeling 
so it could never sneek out though a crack 
or go with out ever coming back
If you could give it away 
and it would stay fresh day after day 
for when it no longer here 
or was not ever truely there
but in my heart I know 
that those feeling were something 
glass or steel could ever hold

over 2 years ago

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Lauren Deegan (Australia) published:

Regret

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I stared up at the blue sky that was slowly turning black. As the blue minised my fear increased. Soon there was only blackness. Then there was shining light, lace wings and elagent dress. For some reason this beautiful sight filled me with fear. I should have know better then to do it, but it was to late, far to late. The magnificant being turned on me and saw what i was holding in my hand. A look of horror...

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over 2 years ago

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Lauren Deegan (Australia) published:

Buried Treasure

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I looked down at the wooden box. With its painted designs and gold trimming. On any other day it would have seemed beautiful, but not today. It held the greatest treasure the thing I lived for in it, so why did it seem dark, so ugly. It should have been beautiful, radiant even why not. The box had been hand pick for today. In my heart I knew why it was because today I was watching the treasure I had...

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over 2 years ago

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Lauren Deegan (Australia) published:

A Bottle of Love

FREE WRITING

have your ever wanted to bootle a feeling 
so it could never sneek out though a crack 
or go with out ever coming back
If you could give it away 
and it would stay fresh day after day 
for when it no longer here 
or was not ever truely there
and i ask myself everyday 
if this would make all the sadness go away
but in my heart I know 
that those feeling were something 
glass or steel could ever...

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over 2 years ago

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Lauren Deegan (Australia) published:

Red

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I stared in to the distance at the sunset but that wasn’t what it was is was fire burning and ranging though my village. Then I was running towards the fire, next I heard the scream and then there was a worst sound gun shouts. I tore through the gates all I could think about was the fact that if I hadn’t snuck out to see him and left the gate open this never would have happened it was all...

over 2 years ago

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Lauren Deegan (Australia) published:

Red

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I stared in to the distance at the sunset but that wasn’t what it was is was fire burn and ranging though my village. Then I was running towards the fire, next I heard the scream and then there was a worst sound gun shouts. I tore through the gates all I could think about was the fact that if I hadn’t snuck out to see him and left the gate open this never would have happened it was all...

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over 2 years ago

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Lauren Deegan (Australia) published:

Black

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I looked up at the black sky and thought longingly that I could one day saw though it on a plane ready to going off to a safe place with no war or danger. I could not begin to imagine how amazing a place like that would be. A place that wasn't torn apart by war and sadness. But then the peace was brocken by a fleet of fighter planes that suddenly flow across the sky, they had come out...

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over 2 years ago

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