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AddyG

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I'm just a young student whom loves to write. Give feedback on how I could improve my writing because I am always willing to listen.

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AddyG (United States) published:

New Year, New Me

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New year, new me. 
Just like every year. 
At 12:01am on the first day of every year
we tell ourselves that we are now
different. 
But who actually changes?
You don’t change 100%, you only change habits. 
You aren’t new. 
You are still similar. 
Maybe your a better friend, 
maybe you eat healthier,
maybe you stop playing people or gossiping. 
But those are improvements that don’t make you a new person. 
You will never be new. 
This is why this...

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AddyG (United States) published:

Through the Bird's Eye

PROMPT: Birdsong

Flying above the clouds
Flying above the crowds
Tweet tweet
Chirp Chirp

Flying solo and proud

Soaring through the breeze
Soaring through the trees
Caw caw
Cry cry
Soaring in 80 degrees

Drifting towards the sky
Drifting towards a guy
Shriek shriek
Cheep cheep

Drifting until the wind dies

Yes, I'm a bird
Yes, you heard:
Tweet tweet
Chirp chirp
Caw caw
Cry cry
Shriek shriek
Cheep cheep

And these are my words

 

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