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United States

Blog: mandmdaylife.blogspot.com

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Scriptor (United States) reviewed:

5 First Steps

PROMPT: Five Beginnings

As far as the bird scene, my best advice would be to show the boy's emotions through the whole thing. Was he napping? Was the bird blurry? Did it look like a dream? Wasn't he concerned about this massive bird...

almost 3 years ago

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Scriptor (United States) reviewed:

Backspace

PROMPT: Poetry

You have so much to say and you can! You are going to be great! Do not fear cliches!! Make them your own! Tame the cliche and use it in a way that has never been used before! You are...

almost 3 years ago

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Scriptor (United States) published:

Where Do You Want to Live?

PROMPT: Poetry

I want to live in a castle that looks like a cottage
where there is a cobblestone path
leading to the heavy oak door with a large brass handle
There would be ivy growing up the side
with climbing roses intertwined
And it would be close to a brook or creek
Deep enough to cool down in, but crystal clear
and littered with sparkling, technicolor pebbles
And there would be cattails and weeping willows
growing along the bank
amidst red...

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almost 3 years ago

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almost 3 years ago

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Scriptor (United States) published:

Arella's Bag

PROMPT: Inventory

Arella Piper Snoh; 16 years old; Icy Water Township, Morana

3-4 glass jars of varying size

2-3 field journals (including potion and plant identification)

A first-aid healthcare pack (with a lot of extra items stuffed inside, like a suture and alcohol disinfectant)

a change of clothes (complete with extra thick socks and a second pair of thermal gloves)

non-perishable food (specifically energy-filled bars and canned fruit)

a long, thick rope

a large burlap sack filled with numerous jewels (which she...

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almost 3 years ago

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Scriptor (United States) published:

Protectors

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition 2015

A shriek found itself a ride on a cold nighttime wind current, blowing it far away from the lungs that expelled it.  It reached the ears of a teddy bear that flanked a sleeping form, but the child did not stir.  The Bear grew and became thick and strong.  Its muscles hardened and it tensed, waiting for something to come.  It's ears twitched, listening for the tell-tale shriek.  It peeled back its leather-like lips, revealing the sickly pointed teeth of a carnivore....

about 3 years ago

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about 3 years ago

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Scriptor (United States) reviewed:

Quiet

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition 2015

I think you have a really good opportunity here to make a strong connection between real-life prejudices and these mixed-breed prejudices. This is well written and well-developed. I have a great image in my head of the kind of world...

about 3 years ago

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Scriptor (United States) published:

Protectors

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition 2015

A shriek found itself a ride on a cold nighttime wind current, blowing it far away from the lungs that expelled it.  It reached the ears of a teddy bear that flanked a sleeping form, but the child did not stir.  The Bear grew and became thick and strong.  Its muscles hardened and it tensed, waiting for something to come.  It's ears twitched, listening for the tell-tale shriek.  It peeled back its leather-like lips, revealing the sickly pointed teeth of a...

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about 3 years ago

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about 3 years ago