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Demory (United States) published:

7 Things I Never Said

PROMPT: Enumeration

  1. The first time we met, I texted my friends and told them I was in love. (I was partially joking, but Oh My God you took my breath away.)
  2. I stalked your girlfriend on Facebook and decided I was prettier than her, but when I met her I felt awful about it. (She was nicer than either of us will ever be.)
  3. I lied to myself a lot about my feelings for you. (I just saw you as a friend,...
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almost 2 years ago

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Demory (United States) published:

7 Things I Never Said

PROMPT: Enumeration

  1. I got hit in the face with a soccer ball. It was more embarrassing than painful. Everyone was looking at me. It was like they were waiting to see whether or not they could laugh. I was dazed and a bit dizzy and all I could think was that I was about to cry in front of all my friends. You must have read my mind. You pulled me off the field and behind the bleachers. "You're okay," you said...
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almost 2 years ago

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Demory (United States) published:

An Honest Thank You

PROMPT: Letter Writing Competition 2016

Ezra,
    Thank you for the necklace you sent. I must admit, I was surprised when I opened the door to see a small package with your name. I didn't think remembering each other's birthdays was something we still did. 
    I mean, of course we remember. There's no way not to. At Christmas time I'll always think of how your birthday is the day after, and all of your presents are combined. If that was the only time I thought of...

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almost 2 years ago

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Demory (United States) published:

An Honest Thank You

PROMPT: Letter Writing Competition 2016

Ezra,
    Thank you for the necklace you sent. I must admit, I was surprised when I opened the door to see a small package with your name. I didn't think remembering each other's birthdays was something we still did. 
    I mean, of course we remember. There's no way not to. At Christmas time I'll always think of how your birthday is the day after, and all of your presents are combined. If that was the only time I thought of...

Seeking Peer Reviews

almost 2 years ago

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Demory (United States) published:

An Honest Thank You

PROMPT: Letter Writing Competition 2016

Ezra,
    Thank you for the necklace you sent. I must admit, I was surprised when I opened the door to see a small package with your name. I didn't think remembering each other's birthdays was something we still did. 
    I mean, of course we remember. There's no way not to. At Christmas time I'll always think of how your birthday is the day after, and all of your presents are combined. If that was the only time I thought of...

Seeking Peer Reviews

almost 2 years ago

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Demory (United States) published:

An Honest Thank You

PROMPT: Letter Writing Competition 2016

Ezra,
    Thank you for the beautiful necklace you sent. I must admit, I was surprised when I opened the door to see a small package with your name. I didn't think remembering each other's birthdays was something we still did. 
    I mean, of course we remember. There's no way not to. At Christmas time I'll always think of how your birthday is the day after, and all of your presents are combined. If that was the only time I thought...

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almost 2 years ago

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Demory (United States) reviewed:

Nothing More, Nothing Less

PROMPT: Six-Word Memoir

What impressed me most in this piece was the length of the words. It is only 6 words, but it tells so much more and seems so much more interesting. In my own writing, my 6 word stories tend to...

over 2 years ago

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Demory (United States) reviewed:

3:23

PROMPT: Flashlight

From a technical standpoint, maybe "I cannot keep my bones from shaking" or something similar would make more sense than escape. One does not really escape bones or escape a shaking hand. That being said, I love this piece! The...

over 2 years ago