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justmar

United States

Teenage literary critic and book translator. Poetry enthusiast, chocolate lover, and British TV addict. Nothing special, but everything extraordinary :) this is mostly free verse poetry, but I also write lyrics, prose, stories, and book reviews

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My goal for anything that I ever write is to spark a feeling in the reader. I write from as much experience as possible, and I pour out my thoughts and feelings out into my stories. I don't write often, but when I do... sometimes magic happens!

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justmar (United States) reviewed:

Summer

FREE WRITING

seems as if it's missing an ending or conclusion

24 days ago

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justmar (United States) reviewed:

Non Binary

FREE WRITING

I love the personal isight you provided. Just remember, it gets better! <3

24 days ago

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justmar (United States) reviewed:

Blurry Perspective

FREE WRITING

I really enjoyed your metaphors and the way you carried the piece through. Nice job!

24 days ago

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justmar (United States) published:

a death in numbers

PROMPT: 0-9

0 words said as you left the house
1 door slammed behind you 

2 thoughts in my head
3 stop sign at the intersections
4 drunk teens coming home from a party
5 hours passed by
missed calls from your mom
7 days to plan the funeral
8 thousand dollars 
9 years later I still can't move on
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about 2 months ago

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justmar (United States) published:

a death in numbers

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n0 room for error
chance that i took
2 wishes granted 
3 songs that we called our own
4 little kittens that you saved at the car wash
5 nights I spent falling asleep in your arms
6 senseless arguments, ending in remorse
7 times I told you I loved you
8 weeks apart 
9 letters that I never sent 

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about 2 months ago

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justmar (United States) published:

all new me

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a skirt,
    a shirt,
        a dress,
             too short.
We’ve never dressed to please
yet somehow here our worth is
just by appearances appeased
            my skills,
        my brain,
my jokes
all turned to certain ash.
for it’s now looks determine
value, not the talents I possess.
a look, a word, detention slips and
calls home to my dad. that’s all it took,
my self-esteem; the value I now had. my style,
a wanton need, now gone, just like the pride I...

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about 2 months ago

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justmar (United States) published:

all new me

FREE WRITING

a skirt,
    a shirt,
        a dress,
             two shorts.
We’ve never dressed to please
yet somehow here our worth is
just by appearances appeased
            my skills,
        my brain,
my jokes
all turned to certain ash.
for it’s now looks determine
value, not the talents I possess.
a look, a word, detention slips and
calls home to my dad. that’s all it took,
my self-esteem; the value I now had. my style,
a wanton need, now gone, just like the pride I...

Seeking Peer Reviews

about 2 months ago

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justmar (United States) published:

letter to my first love

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I know this won't last forever, i always have. And I don't have any foolish hopes about love, especially not our love. You've never promised me forever, which is good because I wouldn't have believed you either way. But I never needed forever, I just needed you. When I tell you that you were the best thing that ever happened to me, I'm being 100% serious. And when I tell you that you have no idea how much i love...

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about 2 months ago

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