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Bo Bednar

United States

My name is Bo. That is all you never need know. Hey- that rhymes!

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Bo Bednar (United States) published:

I Cannot Continue This Way

PROMPT: Acrostic Verse

I find myself trapped under an invisible weight
Curled up in the fetal position 
Agonizingly close to where I need to be
Never quite there
Never really sure if I want to be.
'Oh, but you have it better than so many others'
The mantra I repeat to try and keep going
Coming up with excuses to stay in bed
Only ten more minutes, Mom.
Now I feel guilty
There's no reason I should feel this bad
I've had everything handed...

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Bo Bednar (United States) published:

Outburst

PROMPT: 25 Words

"Be powerful, like a man," they told him.
So he swallowed his feelings once again, just like always.
Too much pressure causes things to explode. 
 

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2 months ago

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Bo Bednar (United States) reviewed:

An Honesty Inquiry

PROMPT: Monostitch

I would delete a few ellipses (3 is standard, and looks more professional), or replace them altogether with a colon. Otherwise, keep it the same! It's great.

2 months ago

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Bo Bednar (United States) published:

Depression

PROMPT: Monostitch

Finding myself in the fetal position, every breath soaked in pain.


Another one, titled 'Locker Room'

In the shower, nobody can see your tears.


 

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Bo Bednar (United States) published:

Depression

PROMPT: Monostitch

Finding myself in the fetal position, every breath soaked in pain.

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Bo Bednar (United States) reviewed:

Obi

PROMPT: Monster Flash Fiction Competition 2018

I really like the entire last paragraph. I can feel the emotion that Obi is both feeling and witnessing, and his desire to be able to know her better. Honestly, I would leave the wording of that paragraph alone because...

4 months ago