Bo Bednar (United States) published:
PROMPT: Acrostic Verse
I find myself trapped under an invisible weight
Curled up in the fetal position
Agonizingly close to where I need to be
Never quite there
Never really sure if I want to be.
'Oh, but you have it better than so many others'
The mantra I repeat to try and keep going
Coming up with excuses to stay in bed
Only ten more minutes, Mom.
Now I feel guilty
There's no reason I should feel this bad
I've had everything handed...
about 2 months ago
Bo Bednar (United States) reviewed:
I really like the entire last paragraph. I can feel the emotion that Obi is both feeling and witnessing, and his desire to be able to know her better. Honestly, I would leave the wording of that paragraph alone because...
4 months ago