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Umbreon (United States) reviewed:

The Sickness and The Strong

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This piece showed the reader that they shouldn't bottle up their feelings. There are others that are experiencing things like what you are, that there will always be people who want to talk with you. Although it felt a bit...

over 4 years ago

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Inspiring or Abusive

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This piece was amazing. The introduction and conclusion were well constructed. There were some grammatical and punctuation mistakes, but they're weren't major. Your essay gets you to think about what is really going on behind the scenes; it is showing...

over 4 years ago

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Bullied for Religion

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     I fell on the ground; the hard, cold gym floor was pressed against my face. I looked up to see the figure who had shoved me, let's call him John. John looked like he was just above six feet, almost a foot taller than I was. His blond hair was all sweaty due to the running we had been doing previously. His blue eyes showed me that I better stay down for the meantime. I didn't know what...

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Umbreon (United States) reviewed:

Favorite Color

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Besides the fact that you said "It is one of the three primary colors." twice, this piece was amazing. It was awe-inspiring and makes you think about simple things in life in a more complex manner. Nice work!

over 4 years ago

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Umbreon (United States) published:

Chess

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Life is like a game of chess,
everyone begins in the same position.
You make one move,
someone makes another.
Almost nobody's moves are the same.
You have people all around you,
supporting you all the way.
The pawns are your friends,
all else are your family.
Death is your opponent,
slowly advancing.
Your close ones fight with you,
getting claimed  throughout the game.
You are the king of your side,
your queen sticking next to you.
One wrong move...

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