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Abi Pinner

United Kingdom

what, You egg?
[stabs him.]

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Abi Pinner (United Kingdom) published:

Sounds Assail Me

PROMPT: Sounds Assail Me

The sharp snap, another crack as
I tumble through lifes brick-a-brack. 
Piles of memory 
Miles a-reaching- breaching thoughts. 
Every echo a one, a two 
three; times along the corrador of time. 
Booming loudness, fading as memorys do. 
This is the rhyme i find 
it occupies my mind; a din
you could say. 
It wails long past bedtime 
raising with a scream, 
as morning light does stream. 

I clamour for relife, 
but lifes twisted feet keep carrying me. 
These sounds assail...

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Abi Pinner (United Kingdom) published:

The other side

PROMPT: Birdsong

Shattered with a clash, 
metal on wood with a bash and a rush as mirrored glass falls. 
In its broken reflections lies a sobbing girl.
She cries and the tears weigh her down.
Drip. 
There goes another one. 
The cup that whooshed into her other self, 
it lies discarded on the cracked floor. 
And with a thud, thud, thud she picks it up to throw once more. 
The broken mirror girl is still crying with the drip drop tears streaking her face.  ...

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11 months ago

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Abi Pinner (United Kingdom) reviewed:

Mara Bennett

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2017

Well Done, keep it up! I am excited to see a full novel from you.
All the best x

11 months ago

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Abi Pinner (United Kingdom) published:

Somewhere

PROMPT: On the Last Day of the World

Somewhere at the end of the world there will be a girl sitting in the middle of nowhere smiling. It will be silent and still and there will be nothing to do other than breath. 
The girl enjoys nature, but cannot consume enough; at the end of the world she can see it all. Morning, evening and night. Until she is full and happy, the girl will sit and observe. 
On the last day of the world you will find...

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11 months ago

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about 1 year ago

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Abi Pinner (United Kingdom) reviewed:

Free!

PROMPT: 1 Photo, 100 Words

It made me laugh and I'm having a bad day two x

about 1 year ago

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Abi Pinner (United Kingdom) reviewed:

Cold, Fears and Starlight

PROMPT: Talking to “You”

I love this piece of writing. You have put it together so well and really created a sense of raw emotion. The only small bit of advise I would give is although being vague and building a scene with words...

about 1 year ago

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Abi Pinner (United Kingdom) published:

flames

PROMPT: Writing Small

The fire was accedental.
Well the way the matchstick found my books was accidental; until that point everything was... conicidencedental. I will admit when the door set itself ablaze I didnt try to extiguish it. So yes, I did burn the school down but the match did all the work. 

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